I have never posted anything that I have written before, because I guess Im pretty shy, and have never thought that what I wrote was ever really that good. So after talking with someone that has brought out a little courage in me, I sat down and wrote this poem and said ok ......here it goes...................
YOUR EYES !!!!!
Your eyes, are so deep, Your eyes are oh so clear.
When I gaze into them, They wipe out all the fear.
Your eyes are so intence, Your eyes cut through me.
With every glance you give me, I see eternity.
Your eyes are like a star, Your eyes are truly bright.
With every look you share with me, I seem to lose the fight.
Your eyes knock me down, Your eyes pick me up.
I get so lost, in the beauty, of this crystal cup.
So when I think, that all is lost, after giving 1000 tries.
All I ever have to do, is look into your eyes.
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Nation !!!!
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September 11, 2007 Your Eyes !!
December 01, 2008 03:45 PM EST
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