Relief within, sound of a friendly reminder
Sweeter, better, voice lilt smile, gently on whim
Comfort of friend, here, or ear to ear relation
Since creation, shared priceless moments, gifts of love
Suddenly, a whoop of laughter, wondering why
The air revels in happiness, stars shine above
Soon is late, hesitation to paint over height
Childhood felt like forever, dreams on starry nights
Rooms convey dialogues, within colorful mists
The daily calendar, bookmarks and countless lists
Footprints replay carpet's worn and torn images
Memories, reminders, a silent room today
Message quickly scratched, best wishes stationary
Scribbles on scenic postcard, unusual stamp
Certain sadnesses, empty nest melancholy
Empty spaces, part sad, quiet pretends
Behind closing eyes, dreaming, just around the bend
Pixilated voices, images, touching hands
Life's wonderful mysteries, the kiln fires within
Sundial winks its majesty, shadow colored vim
Yesterday's baggage forded streams, rapid rivers
Along the winding trail, destination in mail
Sky being neighbor, friend knowing trueness of heart
Nothing better than hearing laughter in the park
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William Dotani
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Comments: 29
Blessings and best wishes - S.
Those were the days!
Memories, reminders, a silent room today
So many wonderful images in this poem. I can really feel the emotions.
Time does go by so quickly and
childhood is gone too soon.
I agree-'nothing better than
laughter in the park'
You speak the poets code. Holographic 3-d word paint, applied layer upon...starry layer... of spontaneous laughing friendship.
Thanks for posting in Journey Into Poetry !
I have a friend that I'm seperated from by many miles and your verse
made me think of his laughter and times we used to enjoy together.
Now, just as in your verse, I send postcards in the mail.
Your verse has thrilled my spirit today and I wanted you to know that.
:-)
The air revels in happiness, stars shine above"
Love that magical bit, William.