by Lune Wolfsong
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August 7, 2006

The Gate - NiftyFifty #6

November 14, 2008 11:56 AM EST (Updated: February 15, 2009 04:44 PM EST)
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She paused, spectral hand on the gate, but she did not look back. They had loved her well, and she them. She understood it all, now.  Free will, the truth of Love, why sometimes the answer to prayer was “No.” She smiled, and flowed through the gate into the mist.

 















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Fifty word story to the photo prompt from Reena's NiftyFifty group.  If it looks like fun, feel free to join us. :)
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Comments: 34

Apryl Just Apryl Nov 14, 2008, 11:57am EST
Lune; This is absolutely beautiful!
lynn a. Nov 14, 2008, 11:57am EST
Lune, this is very nice. I like it a lot. And don't have a clue as to the total mystery. Very, very good.
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 12:03pm EST
:) Thank you, Apryl, and thank you, Lynn.
ELLEN B. Nov 14, 2008, 3:42pm EST
Very soft and dreamy, with a lesson learned, but for what. How delicious. Is there more.? Ellen B
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 3:46pm EST
Thanks, Ellen. No more, at present.
sheila h. Nov 14, 2008, 4:30pm EST
the words match so well the ephemeral aspect of the prompt..
beautiful..inspiring..there you go! just like I said that you are..:)
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 7:18pm EST
Thank you, Sheila, Reena, and Judi. :)
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Nov 14, 2008, 7:57pm EST
ethereal and solid by turns... lovely!
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Nov 14, 2008, 7:58pm EST
So glad I could be the one to help deliver a timely message for you too.
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Nov 14, 2008, 7:58pm EST
wishing you laughter, dear one
Kay M. Nov 14, 2008, 9:05pm EST
Lovely
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 9:26pm EST
Thank you, Quinn, and Kay.

Quinn, so am I. :)
Sue T. Nov 14, 2008, 11:20pm EST
A lovely, dreamy story, Lune. Well done.
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 11:23pm EST
Thank you. :)
Lisa Frost Nov 14, 2008, 11:35pm EST
This is really well done! I agree very ethereal.
Lune Wolfsong Nov 14, 2008, 11:56pm EST
Thanks. :)
Phyllis R. Nov 15, 2008, 2:38am EST
Absolutely beautiful Lune!!!
Aubrey :) Nov 15, 2008, 1:47pm EST
I love that picture.
Marge H. Nov 15, 2008, 3:40pm EST
Love it Lune! I really hope that all of those questions will be answered.
Pat M. Nov 16, 2008, 12:51am EST
Gorgeous, Lune.
DIANE D. Nov 16, 2008, 2:54am EST
Wonderful job!
elizabeth e. Nov 16, 2008, 8:57am EST
Quite lovely, Lune.
Alkistis Wechsler Nov 21, 2008, 10:18pm EST
... and we fly away with her! Only to come back to look again at this beautiful gate!
Mary (diet dr pepper junkie) T. Nov 24, 2008, 6:13am EST
I guess it's not suprising that most of the entries are on the heavenly gate. Good one, Lune.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Nov 25, 2008, 9:18pm EST
Loved this Lune. All of this beauty wrapped up in fifty words...amazing!
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Dec 27, 2008, 8:49am EST
Wow Lune!

This one gave me chills.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Dec 27, 2008, 8:49am EST
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Lune Wolfsong Jan 21, 2009, 3:51am EST
Thanks. :)
Selene N. Jan 22, 2009, 12:54am EST
Love it!
Jim Ross Feb 10, 2009, 7:46pm EST
As ethereal as the open gate in the mist, Lune. Beautiful.
Lune Wolfsong Feb 14, 2009, 11:47am EST
Thanks. :)
Great stuff, thanks for sharing!


Sorry about the cut & Paste, but lately I've been a real
Lune Wolfsong Feb 20, 2009, 5:26pm EST
Thanks, Kryistina. Nice to see you around Gather again. :)

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