Trusting my vibes
finally,I felt
I had a choice
I could turn back the way I'd come,
which would be long and dreary
and it was nearing sunset
other paths would close
and I 'd have to follow that difficut road.
My life approved my decisions
finally, I felt again
I had a choice
I could sit and close my eyes,
intimating ancient spirits
and breathing their presence
cos, other paths would close
and I'd have to follow that difficult road.
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Comments: 17
The second stanza is a rapture of a sort in acceptance, but he last two lines seemed not in sync as to flow with the rest of your verses.
It's about my meditation, which plays an important part in my life.Trying to display the truth that instead of walking here and there, I must sit and be focussed. Recalling what my ancestors did and got success...I am looking for an appropriate path..
Your comments are always helpful...Much appreciated...
plz come again
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but I'm no critic,
though.......
I see where you're going with it
and it works for me........
I finally finished mine. Had a lot of fun with it. Hope it's what you were looking for.