by Chana M.

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June 6, 2008

Freedom - NIFTYFIFTY, #2

October 21, 2008 06:33 PM EDT (Updated: May 31, 2009 04:29 AM EDT)

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The wind blew lightly
carassing my face
As I looked out at a world
only I could explore
A world filled with the warmth
of summer
the colour of fall
The amazing spectacle
fills my soul
Through my eyes
the world has such beauty
the innocence of a child

© JACM 30 May 2009

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Tags: fiftyword, niftyfifty 2, freedom, i try, poem, poetry, wind, warm, caressing, face, world, explore, warmth, summer, colour, fall, spectacle, soul, eyes, beauty, innocence, child

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Peter Joseph Swanson Oct 21, 2008, 6:35pm EDT

That was really cool !!!

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.* Sandi * Oct 21, 2008, 6:46pm EDT

really nice one

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t w. Oct 21, 2008, 7:03pm EDT

nice

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Lisa Frost Oct 21, 2008, 7:04pm EDT

That is great!

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Lona Herling Oct 21, 2008, 7:08pm EDT

I really enjoyed this.

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Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Oct 21, 2008, 7:32pm EDT

Very nice. Such a brief period of innocence, though. Then, the world swoops in and chips it away.

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Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Oct 21, 2008, 8:10pm EDT

Very nice.

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Pat M. Oct 22, 2008, 6:59am EDT

Beautiful Chana.
Gave me inspiration for a post as well.

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DIANE D. Oct 22, 2008, 7:03am EDT

Thanks for the"lift"

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Nancy L. Oct 22, 2008, 8:02am EDT

oh to be that young again...

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Melissa J Oct 22, 2008, 11:50am EDT

Awesome Chana. I can feel the wind and sun on my face.

Here's a 10, thanks for posting at Up All Nite Café.

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Janie E. Oct 22, 2008, 5:49pm EDT

Beautiful, Chana!!!

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Amy H. Oct 22, 2008, 7:02pm EDT

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Jean E. Oct 23, 2008, 10:02am EDT

Bravo Chana ~ well done~j

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Alison H. Oct 25, 2008, 1:57am EDT

It is lovely

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