by Robert - just a simple man - B.
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April 12, 2007

MY PILLOW (a spontaneous, weary-eyed, midnight writing)

October 17, 2008 01:36 AM EDT (Updated: October 17, 2008 02:41 AM EDT)
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MY PILLOW

©midnight 2008 - Robert C Burnham

This was written by a guy

Though you might not think so

Because tears were cried

 

In the darkness of the night

I've searched in vain

For someone to hold tight

 

I'm not talking bout a one night stand

But a lady and lover

To share my plans

 

It's always lonely, waking alone

My heart's a little bitter

But it's not stone

 

I can feel the passion that I have to give

But without someone to take it

I wonder why I live

 

I live because, the Lord tells me to

And I cling to my faith

Even as I search for you

 

Right now - you're image I don't know

Meanwhile in the deep dark hours

I hug my pillow.

 

 

 
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Comments: 30

.* Sandi * Oct 17, 2008, 1:43am EDT
awww Robert, it is a good one, but sad
Janet "Jax" B. Oct 17, 2008, 2:03am EDT
It is a little sad, but good job Robert.
Jan S. Oct 17, 2008, 2:09am EDT
Sorry you're feeling down. Remember that you are loved - by God and by friends.
Alison H. Oct 17, 2008, 2:30am EDT
The feelings are beautifully expressed.
Robert - just a simple man - B. Oct 17, 2008, 2:42am EDT
Good night. Back to the pillow. If I don't get sleep - schools don't get built.
Mrslisae Photography E. Oct 17, 2008, 4:54am EDT
~prayers
Ana S. Oct 17, 2008, 6:03am EDT
Its been a long time since I have been on and I am saddened to see you are sad and lonely. Don't frett, I know there is love out there for your Robert! Your piece is very touching and it is nice to see a man in touch with his feelings! There is no shame in expressing yourself! Write on my friend!!
Blue skies and ice cream pies!!
Cindy A. Oct 17, 2008, 6:58am EDT
I love to hear a man say whats in his heart! Robert, dont ever give up! Just be yourself, any man that can write like you do, has alot of love in his heart...some lucky lady someday will be thankful for that!
Kushal Poddar Oct 17, 2008, 7:47am EDT
Lonely and lovely. I think I'll echo what Cindy said.

Sweater*:
Kathryn E. Oct 17, 2008, 8:04am EDT
beautiful and lovely.............thank you....much felt this day.
mary bryant Oct 17, 2008, 8:16am EDT
you sound so lonely........
Sharon P. Oct 17, 2008, 12:26pm EDT
Sweet by sad.
Georgiana S. Oct 17, 2008, 7:05pm EDT
Is your friend still missing Robert?
Janie E. Oct 17, 2008, 7:08pm EDT
Awww, Robert!!!!! Don't give up because she's out there, somewhere, waiting for you!!!! She may be right in the last place you would ever think to look!!!!
Jennifer K. Oct 17, 2008, 11:46pm EDT
Eh. So many fish in the sea! Cold, aren't I? I sorry! Nice piece.
necee t. Oct 17, 2008, 11:59pm EDT
oh dear Robert... this is sad but well written... the photo is beautiful and i also like your pillow and sheets...hehe
God bless you my friend...
Glome . . . Oct 18, 2008, 1:34am EDT
Good choice :)
Melissa J Oct 18, 2008, 1:57am EDT
Very nice. And I love the pictures to go along with it. :o)

Here's a 10 for you & thanks for posting at Up All Nite Café.
Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Oct 18, 2008, 12:08pm EDT
God Bless You dear Robert.
Angela A. Oct 18, 2008, 2:49pm EDT
Aw, Robert buddy! It's too bad my heart is already spoken for.
Alas, it is not to be..
But, in La land, you're still my king.
Hugs, and smooches, A.
Deloris Wright Oct 18, 2008, 6:44pm EDT
Robert, Before I meet Col George W. I was just like your poem. I prayed for some one to live out my years with. Then one day the loard answered my prayers and sent Col George from Texas all the way to Montana and to me.. So just keep busy and one day when you least expect her. She will come to you. Keep the faith!
Shelbia C. Oct 19, 2008, 9:35pm EDT
This is a beautiful poem. I love the picture as well.
René Allen Oct 27, 2008, 6:28pm EDT
This is heart~felt Robert . . . You'll find this poetic work FEATURED in Artistic Minds®

Blessings ~
Rene
Ladybounty ~. Oct 27, 2008, 9:52pm EDT
Beautiful and very touching Robert!
I think we all can relate to these feelings one time or another in our lives!
Lewis (keeping those fires burning) K. Oct 27, 2008, 10:22pm EDT
This is a cool way to get chicks.
Lewis (keeping those fires burning) K. Oct 27, 2008, 10:23pm EDT
I'm just kidding. Seriously -this is a very honest, deeply felt poem, Robert. I know it's cliche, but the wait is for a reason, brother. Take care.
Loneliness is such a terrible feeling. You did a great job with this, Robert.
Terry Collett Nov 2, 2008, 3:30pm EST
A lonely poem but well composed.
Elise w. Apr 13, 2009, 10:36pm EDT
The first picture looks as though you tossed and tumbled all night (from the looks of the sheets) and the second pic is very cool. Great heartfelt poem, Robert. I know it's easy to say be patient when the sayer is not in your shoes. Don't give up on your dreams.

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