by Amanda, the Dark Tigress W.
Member since:
May 25, 2007

The Sweetest Kiss - Easel Musings week 18 - challenge

October 08, 2008 07:29 PM UTC
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The sweetest kiss

so perfect, so sweet

so strong and soft

The kiss that makes

me weak in the knees,

makes me shake all over

The sweetest kiss

from lips more soft

than satin

more smooth than silk

and red as a rose petal.

It can drive you

pleasantly insane.

Comments: 19

Amanda, the Dark Tigress W. Oct 8, 2008, 7:31pm UTC
with a little edit help from my hubby mom- Lisa frost!!
Missy Cline Oct 8, 2008, 7:35pm UTC
AWESOME Job Amanda!!!
Lisa Frost Bailey Oct 8, 2008, 7:44pm UTC
I may have done a spell check, but you wrote it dear!! Great Job!!
Donald M. Oct 8, 2008, 8:28pm UTC
Good job Amanda.
necee t. Oct 8, 2008, 8:38pm UTC
nice job, Amanda... i like this... keep up the good work... Blessings...
Lune Wolfsong Oct 8, 2008, 10:00pm UTC
Beautifully done, Amanda!
Lizzie ~ P*Y*T Oct 8, 2008, 10:17pm UTC
Well done sis!
Mary (diet dr pepper junkie) T. Oct 8, 2008, 10:59pm UTC
good one Amanda
Kushal Poddar Oct 9, 2008, 12:06am UTC
sweet and smooth
Heather M. Oct 9, 2008, 12:13am UTC
Great job, Amanda.
William Dotani Oct 9, 2008, 9:57am UTC
Nice sentiment. I would advise breaking this into two stanza.

I think it very important to read your poem aloud to yourself so you can feel its rhythm and decide which words do and don't fit within this rhythm.

I like to tinker with poems after I've written them.
William Dotani Oct 9, 2008, 9:58am UTC
I hope your first kiss isn't a frog or that musician from Minnesota.
Sharon C. Oct 9, 2008, 11:38am UTC
Wonderful Poem Amanda. I hope you will write more.

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