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by Alysha Renee'

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April 13, 2008

I can't remember...

September 29, 2008 04:42 PM EDT

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if I have posted this unfinished poem before...

Once again
You have caused the words
from my lips to cease
Leaving my mind
an echoing chamber
With the only thought
A memory of your kiss
--Alysha Renee

Tags: writing, encouragement, inspiration, poem, poetry, criticism, feedback

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Bounder .. Oct 21, 2008, 8:26am EDT

Oh, that is good. I enjoyed that very much. A very good poem..

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Alysha Renee' Oct 21, 2008, 5:56pm EDT

thank you D! I have come to really really appreciate it! Which sounds oh, so, modest.

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Christopher Cole Oct 29, 2008, 7:14am EDT

Brief but poignant. Like the carefully placed incision of a surgeon. I liked this a lot.
Peace,
Christopher

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