by William Dotani
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October 27, 2006

All In A Name: "WHITE LIES" week 32 non-challenge (100 word story)

September 24, 2008 04:48 PM EDT
views: 70 | comments: 31
"Hi! How many times have I seen you in here and never introduced myself?"

"Oh boy! There goes Ted again with his stale pick up lines."

"Would you look at that! She hasn't thrown her drink in his face or slapped him."

"It looks like she's staying and Ted's actually lighting her cigarette!!!"

"Of all nights for this to happen."

"Yeah, I know. I wonder if Ted knows his wife is sitting in that booth?"

"Hi, honey. This is Carol. We went to high school together and reminiscenced a bit"

"My name is Beth. I didn't know you were married."
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Comments: 31

Lisa Frost Sep 24, 2008, 4:53pm EDT
Somebody is in trouble.
Marge H. Sep 24, 2008, 5:10pm EDT
Sounds like Beth wasn't playing along with Ted's lie. Good for her. A fun read.
Sheila Deeth Sep 24, 2008, 5:59pm EDT
Ooh er. Nice one.
Kimberly Ripley Sep 24, 2008, 6:53pm EDT
Busted!!
Deloris Wright Sep 24, 2008, 6:56pm EDT
Teds wife has probbly been tru this many times before. Maybe her just is to tired to care.
Ha, ha, ha!
Wilma M. Sep 24, 2008, 10:20pm EDT
OK. What happens next? Do we switch to a scene in divorce court?
Kathy N. Sep 24, 2008, 11:29pm EDT
Good Ole Ted...One in a million. LOL
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Sep 25, 2008, 3:10am EDT
Sounds like he will be getting more than a drink thrown in his face this time.
elizabeth e. Sep 25, 2008, 5:46am EDT
Little white lies.
Told in bars
Come back to haunt
In divorce court wars!

Good drabble, William.
William Dotani Sep 25, 2008, 8:55am EDT
I fear not, since I never liked bars and nowadays I drink zero alcohol. Just lost my taste for it.
lynn a. Sep 25, 2008, 9:19am EDT
Ted's so slick now he slides down the black hole he created for himself.
Kay M. Sep 25, 2008, 10:46am EDT
Hooray! Ted is busted!
aratma d. Sep 25, 2008, 12:23pm EDT
yeap ... somebody didn't play along ...
good one!
Debra C. Sep 25, 2008, 12:53pm EDT
This sounds like someone trying to get caught.
Elsie Duggan Sep 25, 2008, 1:53pm EDT
Those little white lies, lol, Some get you in trouble don't they, great senario William, love it, he needs a kick in the pants, that Ted.
sheila h. Sep 25, 2008, 2:13pm EDT
That Ted needs neutered..
love it,William..
sheila h. Sep 25, 2008, 2:14pm EDT
love elizabeth's lil poem,too..
Well done, William!
Jan S. Sep 25, 2008, 4:59pm EDT
Hee hee... I'll bet Ted's never heard the adage "Beware of white lies; mosquitos drink more blood than lions." I suspect he's about to learn the truth of it, though.
Excellent drabble, William!
Tracey W. Sep 25, 2008, 9:51pm EDT
Clever, as usual. I liked this. Well done.
Tanya P. Sep 26, 2008, 12:35am EDT
Alrighty, then! LOL --- Good on Beth!

Really enjoyed this read, William!
Tracy Fabre Sep 26, 2008, 12:44am EDT
"somebody's fixin' to lose him a trailer..."
Patti M. Sep 26, 2008, 2:38pm EDT
Can you say oops!
Patti M. Sep 26, 2008, 2:39pm EDT
I hope you enjoy the blueberry smoothie
Patti M. Sep 26, 2008, 2:40pm EDT
No need to worry about Larry in the hospital. The next trip is his in Dec. to get two new knees.
Rose H. Sep 26, 2008, 2:55pm EDT
Scoundrel - a not so white lie, could spell trouble.
Curt L. Sep 26, 2008, 5:36pm EDT
Oh, Ted! What have you gotten yourself into? LOL
Barbara B. Oct 1, 2008, 12:22am EDT
What a rascal Ted was!!
Kelly M. Nov 16, 2008, 4:52pm EST
thanks for posting to one for me one for you!

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