r o l l ercoster girl
hums sweetly during the clack clack clack rise to the top
grinningly gleeful thump heart chime the hurdy-gurdy
skyline spreads wide
to overlookover
my tiny bug feelings (ground bound below bellow wallow), details sheathed
within my chest
cause a pause, and sit
up
right,
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triggered by miscommunication,
steel gripped wheels endlessly spin the grinder spark flash burn
into lividness, cornering with tilted slip shift to one side
with a belt of palatable spirited anger, heaving gut wrench dive
barely clinging to stomach contents,
pensive eyes
r o l l across to show disbelief
the let down drop,
s m a s h face drag against the table top.
At last, the ride comes to a slow,
to level off on a brief blur of sadden remorse flush,
the childlike tears of (apology) sorry
r o l l ercoaster girl says,
she doesn't like the
r o l l ercoaster.


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Tell me how you did it, in a message or ping, please. I would like to try something similar one day.
I could actually feel the ride.......
I am pretty much doing "click-by" commenting since I ama month behind and 500 messages await my attention, but thanks for sharing!