It once was useful, and maybe even noble.
Now gravity's unrelenting tug warps and sags its timbers,
yet it beckons passersby with nostalgic anticipation.
It may have been red long ago, but now the barn is gray,
brushed with too many empty days
when only the sun moved, and the amber, dying grass.
I see it on the hillside, looking wise.
I cannot resist.
My approach is not without the seed heads in the socks,
and the uneven terrain threatens my ankles.
Whatever dangers, though, I persevere.
Its southern window calls to my mind's eye.
The darkened opening promises a trapezoid of time-worn artifacts.
Surely there is something to be garnered here:
Precious truths that old stuff may distill or may ignite--
memories of lives and ways now gone
that may prove useful in a pinch.
Several shards of glass still keep their stubborn hold,
and the jambs and sill have twisted,
its lumber trying to remember being trees.
This only feeds my interest to explore
the insides of a structure built for function.
Hairy splinters thwart my desire to grip the weathered wood,
and so I crane my neck and stand on toes to peer inside.
The darkness slowly wanes as my eyes adjust to new light.
Dust, a few dead spiders and more dust
are all that I observe.
It is the road that bekons now,
this barn only fit for landscape portraiture or paint.
A disappointment, sure, but one that fills a void for curiosity.



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They would look great printed side by side.
Haunting photo and poem.
and the jambs and sill have twisted,
its lumber trying to remember being trees.
This only feeds my interest to explore
the insides of a structure built for function."-
just wonderful
I've noticed that in your photography, you seek out the meaning of landscape structures and icons. It's nice to see that in your poetry as well.
"...Dust, a few dead spiders and more dust
are all that I observe.
It is the road that bekons now,
this barn only fit for landscape portraiture or paint.
A disappointment, sure, but one that fills a void for curiosity."
I know this is not necessarily up for critique, but I felt so lost in the windswept wonder and wanted to kick the barn looker's butt for dismissing the barn in the end....maybe it's just me. :)
You are one of my greatest wonders! Glad you are back if only here and then...
Thanks for posting this to Best Original Photos, Art and Writing for 2008
I'll bet you have all kinda photos and thoughts to share with us now that summer is almost gone...i'm looking forward to your posts!
I love barns!!
and yes....those are 'octopi parts' in the photo I took in Greece.
Thanks for posting this to Best Original Photos, Art and Writing for 2008
and the jambs and sill have twisted,
its lumber trying to remember being trees.
Just splendid. So good to read you again.
Now that's what I call good writing; you shared something with us. Many thanks, and congratulations.
Good photo, also.
This is remarkable writing, and I, like Mike, accompanied you and found myself increasingly aware of not just the sights, but particularly the sounds of our footsteps as we walk through such antiquity; the feel of the timbers was right at hand.
The image is wonderful. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read on Gather. I love your work, and always appreciate it when you've taken the time to share your talents with us.
written poem I love to gain reading it !!!
the time of the results out of mind as the take
over of the group is on ... Tracey is back to support
and enthuse well on time again !!!