by Susan V.
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December 4, 2006

Words

September 18, 2008 08:17 PM EDT
views: 39 | comments: 26

On the paper they sit.

Waiting for me to make them fit.

I try and try.

Until I am ready to cry.

Then a thought hits me.

That is when I see.

Words jumping around.

Adjective,verbs and nouns.

This one goes here.

That one goes there.

I only hope it is right.

I've tried with all my might.

Now that doesn't sound to bad.

And for this I am glad.

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Comments: 26

Cara D. Sep 18, 2008, 8:30pm EDT
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Angela A. Sep 18, 2008, 8:44pm EDT
Yeah! Ten!
Donna T. Sep 18, 2008, 8:45pm EDT
Ha! Cute! Welcome to my world.
Beth G. Sep 18, 2008, 9:02pm EDT
lol cute poem about the writing process! Thanks for sharing!
Patti M. Sep 18, 2008, 9:08pm EDT
I could put them on a page and they would stare up at me blankly. Very nice work.
Shaunee C. Sep 18, 2008, 9:20pm EDT
Very nice well worded
Jan S. Sep 18, 2008, 9:22pm EDT
Great description of word problems! It was even harder before Microsoft provided us with the magic of Cut and Paste.
Shelbia C. Sep 19, 2008, 1:06am EDT
This was cute
Xavier Neduveli Sep 19, 2008, 1:22am EDT
That's fantastic...

Hard for me to decide "Words" here too :-)
Kimber F. Sep 19, 2008, 2:55am EDT
I have had that problem before. I have had lines of poetry stuck in my head, but it takes a lot more effort to put them in order and make the poem right. Thanks for sharing and peace.
Adina P. Sep 19, 2008, 4:07am EDT
very cute and jovial poem ! i like the rhythm .
Syed The Shah Sep 19, 2008, 6:49am EDT
lol, great wording, love the whole meaning, grammaticl moaning.
Jennifer R. Sep 19, 2008, 9:01am EDT
Very witty.
April H. Sep 19, 2008, 10:06am EDT
Very nice, Thank you for sharing
Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Sep 19, 2008, 12:42pm EDT
I like that poem...cute
Susan V. Sep 19, 2008, 2:47pm EDT
Thanks for your comments everyone!
Carol B Sep 19, 2008, 5:31pm EDT
Very nice, I liked it a lot.
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Susan V. Sep 21, 2008, 7:05pm EDT
thanks everyone
Sharon B. Sep 21, 2008, 7:56pm EDT
great job
Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Oct 2, 2008, 10:25pm EDT
poems are kind of like scrabble sometimes.
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Oct 14, 2008, 9:30am EDT
Sorry for the generic comment, but I have to catch up on my emails. Giving you a 10 with my comment.
Lisa C. Nov 13, 2008, 8:42am EST
Great post!
~Paying it Forward~
g s. Nov 13, 2008, 3:32pm EST
i like that =]
Tracey Lapham Apr 8, 2009, 1:07pm EDT
lol that's cute...we all have those times when the words won't fit anywhere, and sometimes they even move on us! :P

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