by Amber M.

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February 17, 2008

New Love ( A Poem By ME)

September 17, 2008 02:31 AM EDT

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New Love

A new love, young love,
Fresh and in bud,
Exciting, Heart racingly so,
Though uncertain, exciting still
A Breathless love Full of longing
Eagerness to be together
Reluctance to part

Hand touching hand, Pulse raising
Heart full of love, Head full of doubt
“Do they feel as I?” “Am I just a fool?”
Will our love last?
Will it blossom and grow
Will it bear fruit?
Or wither on the vine

Tags: poem, love, new, first, loves, poetry

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Comments: 26

Shelbia C. Sep 17, 2008, 2:33am EDT

Great poem. you captured it well.

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edna r. Sep 17, 2008, 2:35am EDT

very nice

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Reci W. Sep 17, 2008, 3:00am EDT

Love it, you detailed those feelings well!

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Linda T. Sep 17, 2008, 3:05am EDT

nice

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Bryan "That 80's Dude" B. Sep 17, 2008, 3:24am EDT

That was very good. Reminds me of when I first met my wife and how I felt.

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Missy Cline Sep 17, 2008, 3:29am EDT

great job!

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DrewBerry L. Sep 17, 2008, 6:55am EDT

That goo goo phase.. so much excitement and uncertainity.. lovely just like this poem.

Nice work Angel!

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sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Sep 17, 2008, 8:58am EDT

Good poem!

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Bob B. Sep 17, 2008, 9:23am EDT

Great poem Amber.

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Elise w. Sep 17, 2008, 9:38am EDT

You are a good poet Amber! :-)

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Jennifer R. Sep 17, 2008, 9:43am EDT

Great job.

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Nanci M. Sep 17, 2008, 10:31am EDT

Well written! Keep up the good work!
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Elaine A. Sep 17, 2008, 10:55am EDT

Very Nice ;-)

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Anne W. Sep 17, 2008, 10:59am EDT

Well done!

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Anne W. Sep 17, 2008, 10:59am EDT

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Angela B (There IS a light at the end of the tunnel) Sep 17, 2008, 11:38am EDT

Thanks for posting to What's the Point?

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LaRue B. Sep 17, 2008, 12:06pm EDT

Nice poem!

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rainne chandler Sep 17, 2008, 1:45pm EDT

very nice

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Nurse Nancy S. Sep 17, 2008, 5:43pm EDT

Thank you for posting to

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(Jasper,(Disciple for Christ. w. Sep 18, 2008, 4:09pm EDT

A very good poem, most love dies on the vine these days.

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Kimber L. Sep 22, 2008, 1:02pm EDT

Well written

Thank you for posting to It's a Sign

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Mary B. Sep 22, 2008, 4:56pm EDT

very nice

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J R B. Sep 23, 2008, 12:41am EDT

Nice poem.

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Marsha S. Feb 23, 2009, 11:53am EST

Just letting you know your content has reached 25 comments and has therefore been removed from ~3,000 Here We Come!~

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