by poetrandy R.

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The Corporal

August 24, 2008 04:38 AM EDT

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the corporal spilled coffee on the way to me

he will most certainly pay for this insult today!

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LaRue B. Aug 24, 2008, 8:21am EDT

Very interesting.

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Dan H. Aug 24, 2008, 8:47am EDT

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Patricia J. Aug 24, 2008, 10:06am EDT

Spoken like a true commander. Very nice.

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Tracy Fabre Aug 24, 2008, 10:35am EDT

ruh-roh!

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Donald Hawley Aug 24, 2008, 12:14pm EDT

OK... if you say so. But should a good officer be insulted by the failings of another?. One does not lead by pushing others with a rope but by going ahead and pulling them with a rope.

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Rachel D. Aug 24, 2008, 12:21pm EDT

Thanks for sharing.

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Anne W. Aug 24, 2008, 2:10pm EDT

nice

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Anne W. Aug 24, 2008, 2:10pm EDT

Thank you for posting to Point Whore! Wishing everyone many, many points!

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Kerrell g. Aug 24, 2008, 11:06pm EDT

DROP AND GIVE ME 50!

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K D. Aug 25, 2008, 11:18am EDT

HA HA!! I guess your lucky that all the corporal did!

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