When I finally embrace you
should I feel the woman who was
or treat you as you are now
concerned and caring just because.
When we finally sit to have our chat
shall I imagine your yesterdays
or scramble up the here and now
to create a foggy haze.
Sorries I will not bring you
nor let you tell me what if.
Only allow you to vent it all
if you get my drift.
We can talk about back when
but not how different it is today
I'm sure your emotions will cause
me to already know the way.
Don't you dare forget
I been there, done that too
but as time slips from its shelf
I keep looking forward to you.
Del Cano 2008 August


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Mixed with hopes of a new and improved love.
(I think you want here instead of hear in this line: or scramble up the hear and now? One of those things that spell check will never catch. Or was this a play on words?)
This was an absolutely lovely piece of work. How beautiful to question at all.
How wonderous is the anticipation, like that "first day of summer attitude" sits well on you. This takes us all back to those fast, energetic, hopeful, and hesitant days of first dates, first impressions, first dances.
Dive in, says I...and live, and love, and be busy building that life that everyone envies, everyone craves. You'll never know, until you explore it.
Blessings!
Wilka
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The must be optimism in the proposed meeting. If not I don't want to meet at all. As we get older we have a tendency to drag all our baggage with family troubles, illnesses and other negatives to all our meetings and can't figure out why so and so didn't call back. I "assume" everyone has had troubles but why spend any time talking about those when you first meet someone? Can't we just share the moment and enjoy. If there is reason down the road to continue sharing perhaps then we can share more of our negatives. My mind will not allow me to say, "Hello, glad to meet you. You know my wife died a few months back and I can't sleep at night and my daughter's back is out again and the poor child has a seven year old to take care of and you know my right knee is still bothering me." Why can't we notice the lovely tulips near the street and see the beautiful sky unincombered by personal problems? Why can't we watch the river float by and feel the crisp breeze it produces? It isn't necessary to burden each other with life's crap in a first meet.
This is a lovely poem. Obviously you are a man with a romantic soul.
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