have you felt
the softness
of m'soul
lately
or
have i
made it
easier to
forget how
you choose
to look the
other way
as i am
held
in
place
hanging
with this
promise of
deserving so
much beyond
what you will
never offer
and my
heart
just
is
a
bit
out
of
sync
and i
need to
breathe
a bit more
before i lose
touch of who
i'm supposedly
becoming and
not less of
who you
expect
me
to
be
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Comments: 8
I would just take a look at those few lines to help it flow better and it will be perfect. Otherwise, I’ll have to give it a 10!
If you don't mind ... don't you think that the sentence a bit lengthy?
Best wishes.