What's on my plate is what's on my plate
No need to look for other definitions
Like those that ride on the tail winds
Of rusting steam engine trains
That cast off traces of shadow
Lingering on past the due date
What escape clause has written smokey remains
Suggesting hesitation in the burnt landscape
Of better days just around the bend
As the song is etched eternally
In a full moon behind closed eyes
Still dreaming of dawning sky
What, becomes the least likely answered
Until an expired timeline moves a notch
Past cumbersome measure of calculations
Unraveling wavelengths of distant stars
A few degrees here, there and hereafter
As reflections grind on and retool
I scour and wonder if power of suggestion
Said by a plaque on the wall most ignore
Can sit so idle until a dusting is requested
And the reception is like tapping Midnight
On the shoulder and simply asking is there more
I sort of wonder what Gene Autry felt
In a private seat bolted down and inactive
As the dots ran up and down the field
In traditional manner under bright lights
Trying to recapture another celluloid frame
Where second wind lies in mist of hope
Who wins the race doesn't really matter
For only one participant has entered to run
On a course with but circumspect tomorrows
As they meander out of reach and vaguely teach
Change is like lightning and slow as a turtle


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At any rate, a good job. I think one of the real functions of poetry is to raise questions, not provide answers
I sort of wonder what Gene Autry felt
In a private seat bolted down and inactive
well done my friend.
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what lies between?
Gunmetal gray , radiant hue
Whispering promise,ambitious dreams
Tethered tenuously with gossamer seams
Reality and Afterlife ,dance and twirl
Imagination once tethered now unfurled
Never closer the line between life and death
Hovering sibilant final breath
Hope
Hold on,embrace the hope of tomorrow
Whether greeting joy or sorrow wide eyed
Hope for that chance,golden opportunity to arise.
Hope.
That is what your poem spoke to me..and much more..too difficult to say..
I agree that it could be a song as so many of your poems. I love the title - it definitely speaks of hope for a new tomorrow.
The beauty of this poem is that, other people can so relate to it in their life experiences. (See the comments so far)
Be well, and take as many naps as you need to. If "what's on your plate," is needed rest, do it!
Sorry, but I again slept for 15 hours. Woke up an hour ago and had to talk to my insurance provider to make sure everything is kosher.
Now you have me wondering what Gene Autry was thinking :-)
We all only run the race in front of us--Hoping to glance over and see someone else, a brother or a friend, running along side.
There is challenge and peace (both) in this piece. Lovely write, and healing and napping, and being happy for the joy of being here, one more day, is a gift we give to ourselves, and a gift we do not / should not ever take for granted.
Blessings on your heart, your spirit, and your pen.
Write on.
Wilka
I am so glad you commented on my three sisters post...how did we..unbuddy....hummmmmmmmmmm....
not haveing read your work in a while...this was a good read for me.....
I love your work William....always
"In a full moon behind closed eyes"
thank you for all your cute comments... love and hugs...
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The six lined, five lined stanzas had me looking for a pattern to the format but obviously you have gone with your instincts here. It certainly is a poem worth re-reading.
Your message of 'live in the Here and Now' comes across softly, gently.
Just one more thing--adding punctuation marks will add to the meaning of some lines. Finally, your poem and you are the best judge.
I have found what I don't use I lose.
Awful but true.