by Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen
Member since:
August 5, 2006

Reviving Rain (haiku)

August 09, 2008 11:45 AM UTC
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 We had that lovely quiet rain this morning that revives our landsacpe and freshens the air. 

Reviving Rain 

 

 

Rain falling gently

Bringing tired lawns to life

Renewing flowers

Comments: 18

Cindi P. Aug 9, 2008, 11:53am UTC
HI GF!
Long time no see!
Beautiful poem!
How have you been??
I sure miss GMG !
Hope life is treating you good(and drier for sure)
(((HUG)))
Beth J. Aug 9, 2008, 12:11pm UTC
beautiful haiku
flit . Aug 9, 2008, 12:50pm UTC
wow... happy to see Cindi actually commenting again :)

nice haiku
Sonia M. Aug 9, 2008, 12:52pm UTC
We had that soft rain all during last night.........Lovely haiku, Audrey!
Kerrell Goolsby Aug 9, 2008, 12:52pm UTC
Well done!
Sammie Brown Aug 9, 2008, 1:30pm UTC
Great haiku!
Patricia J. Aug 9, 2008, 2:07pm UTC
Just beautiful haiku Audrey, keep them coming.
sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Aug 9, 2008, 2:13pm UTC
Lovely haiku!
poetrandy R. Aug 9, 2008, 2:42pm UTC
Very nice, S5! A haiku worth remembering!
Rebecca P. Aug 9, 2008, 4:00pm UTC
Lovely Haiku, the rain is very giving in the spring.
Vic Needs Coffee Aug 9, 2008, 4:26pm UTC
Well done.
Deloris Wright Aug 9, 2008, 4:30pm UTC
Very nice
Natalie Neal Whitefield Aug 9, 2008, 6:35pm UTC
Beautiful blessing of soft rain here as well. Very refreshing poem.
Patty H. Aug 9, 2008, 10:37pm UTC
I really like this one, great writting.
arlene m. Aug 11, 2008, 2:45am UTC
lovely

arlene,
University Place florist
Heather M. Sep 26, 2008, 7:30pm UTC
Nice haiku, Sadie.
April H. Jun 24, 2009, 4:50pm UTC

Lovely!  I wrote a haiku today inspired by the rain finally coming!

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