August Haikus

Morro Rock Haiku

often an apparition,

buried by fog, so hard to see,

one of nature’s splendor

Morro Bay Haiku #2

Morro Bay beautiful

clean fresh salty ocean air

enjoy sails sun surf

Morro Bay Haiku #3

Morro Bay and Rock

in Southern California

swimming with dolphin

Comments: 21

Deborah M. Aug 5, 2008, 2:13am EDT

wish i could swim. nice work

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Lisa Frost Aug 5, 2008, 2:28am EDT

It sounds like a beautiful place to see Randy! Great work!

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LaRue B. Aug 5, 2008, 7:47am EDT

Well done!

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Dan H. Aug 5, 2008, 9:04am EDT

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Donald Hawley Aug 5, 2008, 10:32am EDT

Don't remember where Morro bay is. Thought it was in Cuba.

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David W. Aug 5, 2008, 10:48am EDT

You do these so well. Nice work.

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Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. Aug 5, 2008, 11:34am EDT

Hubby and I stayed the night in Morro Bay one time... years ago... I was very pretty and, as I remember, had a great diner for breakfast... I also published a recent poem about August... Great Minds Think Alike, eh?

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Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. Aug 5, 2008, 11:36am EDT

Correction: "IT was very pretty..." duh.

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Anne W. Aug 5, 2008, 1:37pm EDT

Very nice

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Anne W. Aug 5, 2008, 1:37pm EDT

Thank you for posting to Point Whore! Wishing everyone many, many points!

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Patricia J. Aug 5, 2008, 1:52pm EDT

Excellent, Randy.

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Carolion Grailbear Aug 5, 2008, 5:28pm EDT

Waiting for the next step....

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Carolion Grailbear Aug 5, 2008, 5:30pm EDT

What I mean is this - the doorway into the next realm or level - the doorway you didn't go into:
"often an apparition,
buried by fog, so hard to see,"

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