by Laura B.

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August 21, 2007

Amuse Me Challenge for Prompt, "Sparkle"- a Cinquain

August 04, 2008 11:33 PM EDT (Updated: August 06, 2008 11:00 PM EDT)

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Train to Whitefish

We

Sassy hearts

Kissing, pinching, sparkling...

The train works magic.

Love.

Tags: humor, poetry, memoir, poem, love, laura beck nielsen, train, whitefish, montana, cinquain

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Comments: 15

Dan H. Aug 4, 2008, 11:59pm EDT

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Angela A. Aug 5, 2008, 1:19am EDT

Very short. But, I like that it works. Ten!

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Anne Marie A. Aug 5, 2008, 1:41am EDT

magical cinquain for the amuse me sparkle

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Sandi S. Aug 5, 2008, 8:03am EDT

Aww, nice!

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Denise B. Aug 5, 2008, 8:49am EDT

nice :)

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Shirl T. Aug 5, 2008, 10:14am EDT

NICE

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Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Aug 5, 2008, 11:24am EDT

very nice

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Sandre M. Aug 5, 2008, 11:40am EDT

Laura,
I like the cadence you've set up with your choice of words.

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amy s. Aug 5, 2008, 4:45pm EDT

great poem i hope you win

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Winton Charles Hopper III Aug 5, 2008, 4:48pm EDT

very nice...

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Sharon B. Aug 5, 2008, 7:03pm EDT

nice

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Carl "Prime Time" Lee Aug 5, 2008, 11:27pm EDT

Thank you for using Gather Broadcast, where there is an open line of communication for all and you’re more than a connection.

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Michelle W. Aug 11, 2008, 8:09am EDT

Wonderful!

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David P. Aug 17, 2008, 3:37pm EDT

I love your cinquain, Laura.

Poet
creative heart
clever, sparkling, insightful
Her work delights readers
Laura

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Sheila Deeth Aug 18, 2008, 1:00pm EDT

Fun and sparkling.

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