by Brittney R.
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May 30, 2008

Butterfly Gone

August 04, 2008 10:17 PM EDT
views: 97 | comments: 22

Wrapped in her cocoon
She hides from the world
Nothing to fear
Afraid of everything

She waits
For her chance
To emerge
And become something new

Her day will come
To fly away
To face the world
With determination
And everlasting trust
In her creator

And bravely-
She will spread her wings
And forever, be gone

©Brittney R.

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Comments: 22

Ang, wandering aimlessly, G. Aug 4, 2008, 10:20pm EDT
Great poem!!
Bob B. Aug 4, 2008, 10:21pm EDT
Fantastic poem Brittney.
J W. Aug 5, 2008, 12:43am EDT
nice poem
sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Aug 5, 2008, 6:44am EDT
This is very beautiful Brittney!
J R B. Aug 7, 2008, 12:13am EDT
Very nice poem.
Chelsea R. Aug 15, 2008, 12:02am EDT
great job!
April H. Sep 4, 2008, 12:19am EDT
Nice job
Jean E. Sep 9, 2008, 9:22am EDT
excellence has arrived ~J
Amy C. Sep 9, 2008, 12:44pm EDT
very nice!
Bridget ♥ Sep 10, 2008, 3:56pm EDT
Great poem!!
Kristi B. Sep 10, 2008, 10:32pm EDT
great job! thank you for sharing!
Sarah (I want points) Sep 12, 2008, 1:32pm EDT
Lovely! Reminds me of the 100 word story challenge for this last week. It's wonderful.
Pamela K. Sep 19, 2008, 9:24pm EDT
great poem. thank you for posting it.
lena k. Sep 28, 2008, 10:34pm EDT
great
Sherine W. Oct 14, 2008, 10:41pm EDT
wonderful poem!
debra g. Dec 3, 2008, 8:33pm EST
Wonderful poem! We had a great visit and the pet children liked each other too.
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Tiffany G. Jan 18, 2009, 11:32pm EST
very touching poem
Kimber L. Mar 16, 2009, 12:38pm EDT
Beautifully done!
Ms. Meacham: Money Maven Apr 16, 2009, 11:05pm EDT
Introspective piece. Nicely done.
April H. May 28, 2009, 12:38pm EDT

Well done!
Debra H. Jul 22, 2009, 4:07am EDT
Great piece Brittany thanks
Connie C. Dec 8, 2009, 12:24pm EST
Brittany,
That was a beautiful poem. You are very talented.

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