"Next Stop Poem Contest Submission"
Night Train Serenade
On still summer nights
with the windows open wide,
I hear faint, familiar music;
steel wheels on tracks.
And as I listen to the clickety
clack grow louder, the sounds
carry me back to long ago
summers at Grandma's
when trains rumbled
through the city day and night.
Alone in my bed,
I waited for each muffled roar
and clank, the rhythmic thunka. . .thunka,
reassuring as the steady tick-tocking
of the clock in Granny's parlor.
Those memories call to me now
in the sweet, slow whistle of a train,
mournful and magnificent.
The serenade begins softly,
swells to a lusty pitch, dies away in a sigh.
Lulled by the song,
I dream of riding trains in my sleep,
passing bayous, backyards and bean fields.
Mountains and meadows appear
and disappear, frame by frame.
And sometimes, lost in dreamland,
I keep watch until the red light
on the caboose becomes a speck in the distance.
~ Marianne McNamara


Comments: 16
Around xmas time, the engineer plays a little xmas tune on the whistle as he passes through town. We find it rather neat.
in the sweet, slow whistle of a train,
mournful and magnificent.
The serenade begins softly,
swells to a lusty pitch, dies away in a sigh.
And this line: "passing bayous, backyards and bean fields." Well done on the alliteration! It's unexpected, and gives a sense of personalness to this poem.