Sugar Coated.

The Sheer sweetness coils around my fingers with the taste of pure joy.

It wraps around me, pulling me into its decadent little melody.

Those words, spoken with such compassion to make me believe.

Each syllable makes a vibration with in that feels just like a dream.

Cream filled memories and Sugar sweet lies.

They taste so good going down, its impossible to see their disguise.

Comments: 33

Chana M. Jul 19, 2008, 9:50pm EDT

Jenny, I get the distinct feeling of deja vu! You are so right and you describe it so well, I can "see" it in my mind. Thank you for sharing this @ Post Art - Any Medium Jenny!

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Paul Kurrey Jul 19, 2008, 10:46pm EDT

Thanks!

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Sherrie H. Jul 19, 2008, 11:47pm EDT

Been there, done that -- you captured the feelings well!

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Sherrie H. Jul 19, 2008, 11:47pm EDT

Thanks for posting this to Rainbow Connections - Colorful Competition - it's perfect for this week's cream theme!

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Tina Coruth Jul 20, 2008, 3:42pm EDT

Wow! Excellent!

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Brian M. Jul 20, 2008, 8:19pm EDT

I like it.

Thanks for posting at Scores 4 Everyone

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Sherrie H. Jul 21, 2008, 2:20am EDT

Congratulations! You won an Honorable Mention for your article in this week's Cream Competition at Rainbow Connections - Colorful Competitions!

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Bethany C. Jul 21, 2008, 3:02am EDT

Congratulations! I liked this a lot!

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Digital Diva S. Jul 21, 2008, 6:27am EDT

Congratulations!

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Julie (there will always be a rainbow) G. Jul 21, 2008, 9:53am EDT

Well done! I love this... Congratulations!

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Marianne M. Jul 21, 2008, 10:18am EDT

Congratulations, Jenny!

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~♥~ Kim ~♥~ Jul 21, 2008, 11:40am EDT

Congrats Jenny on your Rainbow Connection HM win! :)

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Curt L. Jul 21, 2008, 12:07pm EDT

Wonderful, Jenny! Congratulations!

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Gary H. Jul 21, 2008, 1:08pm EDT

Congratulation on your HM win

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Trudy P. Jul 21, 2008, 1:14pm EDT

Wtg Jenny! Congratulations on your HM!

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Phyllis R. Jul 21, 2008, 4:49pm EDT

Very beautiful, - congrats on your HM in RCCC!!

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jul 21, 2008, 7:21pm EDT

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Xelene *. Jul 21, 2008, 7:39pm EDT

Lovely! Congratulations.

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jenny D. Jul 21, 2008, 8:22pm EDT

Thank You everyone for all of the congratulations.
and I love hearing when you like what I've written.
It makes me all kinds of happy.
:)

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Melinda ~choosing happiness~ S. Jul 22, 2008, 8:57am EDT

Congrats!!

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Leah A. Jul 23, 2008, 8:52am EDT

Great poem. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention!

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Tina Coruth Jul 23, 2008, 10:03am EDT

Congratulations, Jenny!

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apple E. Jul 23, 2008, 3:10pm EDT

Oh how I know every word.....Tasty.....and then oh so bitter.

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR HONORABLE MENTION!!!

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Donna E. Jul 23, 2008, 9:14pm EDT

congrats on your H.M.!

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Shirley ♡ ☮ M. Jul 24, 2008, 1:35am EDT

Congrats on your Honorable Mention!

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Marsha S. Jul 25, 2008, 8:29pm EDT

nicely done

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pauline k. Jul 26, 2008, 7:33pm EDT

congrats...i liked it

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Jerri H. Jul 28, 2008, 12:52am EDT

Very good!

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Sheila Deeth Jul 29, 2008, 8:44pm EDT

Congratulations.

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