by Vinay Benjamin
Member since:
December 22, 2006

The Kiss - (Mirrored Verse)

July 14, 2008 11:38 AM UTC (Updated: July 15, 2008 02:44 AM UTC)
views: 0 | comments: 15

               Lips juxtaposed
          Locked in ecstasy kiss
  Demanding urgency in embrace
Entwined bodies sharing intimacy
         Pleasurable ignorance
 Entertaining harmony and grace
              And innocence
              Merging visibly
                Soul to soul

                    -Reveal-

                  Soul to soul
                Merging visibly
               And innocence
 Entertaining harmony and grace
         Pleasurable ignorance
Entwined bodies sharing intimacy
  Demanding urgency in embrace
        Locked in ecstasy kiss
             Lips juxtaposed

Comments: 15

Lisa Frost Bailey Jul 14, 2008, 11:48am UTC
WOW. I think I am definitely breathless. Perfect words and imagery aligned.
Anne B. Grote Jul 14, 2008, 12:22pm UTC
interesting form and sensual content!
Chana M. Jul 14, 2008, 12:58pm UTC
Vinay, all I can think of is this... Some may see redundancy here, but if you take away part of the equation it would no longer make sense (or as much sense). Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing this @ Post Art - Any Medium!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 15, 2008, 2:41am UTC
This was just super imagination,which grabbed my inner feelings tightly.How balanced writing!!!
Vinay Benjamin Jul 15, 2008, 7:10am UTC
All you wonderful ladies - Jessica, Li, Selene, Anne, Chana and Bhawana - my heartfelt thank you. I enjoy this artform in writing.
Lisa Frost Bailey Jul 15, 2008, 9:09am UTC
Your joy definitely shows through, as do the words that seem to flow so well from you.
Missy Cline Jul 15, 2008, 11:06am UTC
Absolutely wonderful. Romantic and erotic...can't miss with that!!!!!
Vinay Benjamin Jul 15, 2008, 1:53pm UTC
Very engaging icon, Jackie - and yes, absolutely right!! Thank you, for the observation.
Vinay Benjamin Jul 15, 2008, 1:53pm UTC
Li Thank you for introducing Missy and thank you for your warm comment.
Vinay Benjamin Jul 15, 2008, 1:54pm UTC
Missy I'm so glad to be counted among your friends now. Thank you for this visit and the delightful comment.
Charity B. Jul 16, 2008, 12:22pm UTC
((( Oh...gee...was God ever so wonderful--to create the pleasure of feeling )))
Vinay Benjamin Jul 16, 2008, 4:36pm UTC
He was, is and shall be - so I believe Charity

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