I feel not solitude for who I am
Nor let the branded marks leave me blue
For what one has been, is, and so on
Chimes the changing weather's tune
Of unknowns and all that's curious
As such experience replenishes and fuels
Dawning slathers portraits of abeyance
In freely given glistening dew
Moistened feet a cool morning dampens
Sensations, wonder, simplicity, such truth
Never far away a hint of youth
Cycles, wheels and rolling thunder
Eyes that tell of triumph or tears
Simple delights for our agenda
A single flower in blue sky so clear
Bits and pieces, turnstile equations
Good for the goose and another round
Making marks to flourish a fable
Of longing dreams with vigor so proud
But, is the hiccup that happens
Usual fare is now a take out
Not the rough edges you were asking
Moments alone that need a new shelf
Sometimes one must re-build, from inside out
Luck is the love where nothing matters
Sewn in the heart a room she'll abide
The vow was pure to the hereafter
Soulmates are why night stars shine
Gentle reason for my smile
And all is well in these tides


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I am sorry the driver by haters hit you.
10 stars
Hope your feeling better from your fall.
while your comments I surely miss
I will be content to spend the day
reading your verse along the way!
we are so glad to have you back.
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I read your ping and was worried about you.Take care William.Everything will be all right coz you're working hard on your self.Try to relax your mind and body.Whenever you wish just take rounds here.Your health is more important than anything else.
Others have already said it but it bears repeating. I am amazed and impressed that you have not let this setback get you down and have instead turned it into an opportunity to share your insight and experiences.
"Moments alone that need a new shelf
Sometimes one must re-build, from inside out"
I know about the shelf, and about rebuilding inside out...
Good to see you back again and writing.
you are doing much better now than before!!! You're
coming out of that dismal place back into the sunlight
my dear friend. Forget about comments I would much
rather read what you write, from the heart William.
Love you, Barbie
Regards,
Vinay
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