by Sarah (I want points)
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January 12, 2007

Haiku: Life

July 13, 2008 07:52 AM EDT
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Lead a fishbowl life
Comings, Goings, Life all seen
Fake smiles abound

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Comments: 20

j - Frugal Mom - r. Jul 13, 2008, 8:29am EDT
This is pretty neat. Great job Sarah.
Beth G. Jul 13, 2008, 10:16am EDT
This was good! thanks for sharing Sarah!
Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jul 13, 2008, 10:42am EDT
Thanks for posting to

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poetrandy R. Jul 13, 2008, 10:48am EDT
Great poem -- it rings with me!
Amy H. Jul 13, 2008, 11:16am EDT
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Deb J. Jul 13, 2008, 11:34am EDT
Very good haiku Sarah!
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The Red Headed Witch of Gather G. Jul 13, 2008, 1:18pm EDT
very true and powerful
M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jul 13, 2008, 1:38pm EDT
Wish I could do
Haiku like you

Just want to thank you for commenting on my Belly Fat article.

Belly Fat & MUFA

I commented back.
Diane "stormyz" B. Jul 13, 2008, 2:28pm EDT
nice!
Elaine S. Jul 13, 2008, 3:45pm EDT
nice
Cheryl W. Jul 13, 2008, 4:07pm EDT
I like this, Sarah. Good haiku!
M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jul 14, 2008, 10:11am EDT
Sarah, re my Belly Fat article, guess what,
It's working. I've eliminated cravings--since I started doing this about a week ago I already have looser clothes, not a whole lot but enough to know the difference. i.e. I can zip up the jeans without lying down.

Also, my 11 year old granddaughter asked me last week if I was losing weight. She said I looked thinner.

Belly Fat and MUFA

Yea Yea. I'll keep you posted. Wait 'till you read about 'resistant starch', those fat burning carbs.
edna r. Jul 15, 2008, 1:26am EDT
10 for you
April H. Jul 15, 2008, 9:10am EDT
Very good!
Patricia M. Jul 15, 2008, 2:03pm EDT
Very good!
Chelsea R. Jul 15, 2008, 3:25pm EDT
nice poem. very true about society!
JoAnn C. Jul 15, 2008, 7:33pm EDT
good job
Dave L. Jul 15, 2008, 8:53pm EDT
Nice!
Amy C. Jul 16, 2008, 1:26pm EDT
very nicely written
Austin Cushing Jul 20, 2008, 7:27pm EDT
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