night (An American Haiku of 17 Syllables)

Comments: 8

Beth G. Jul 5, 2008, 4:41pm EDT

Very powerful imagery! Thanks for sharing Randy!

Rhetta A. Jul 5, 2008, 4:43pm EDT

Excellent! Thanks for sharing!

Donald Hawley Jul 5, 2008, 5:29pm EDT

Much appreciated.

Charlene C. Jul 5, 2008, 9:03pm EDT

I can just see that in my mind's eye. See the darkness rolling in over the field like a cloud of locusts. That's how I see it.

Amy H. Jul 6, 2008, 3:24pm EDT

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poetrandy R. Jul 7, 2008, 1:18am EDT

Thanks one and all for all the great comments!!!

Alison H. Jul 13, 2008, 1:24pm EDT

Kind of ominous! But night can be like that