by Vic Needs Coffee
Member since:
June 11, 2008

Morning Love

July 05, 2008 08:11 AM EDT
views: 63 | rating: 10/10 (26 votes) | comments: 34
You are my one true love
I wake to you every morning
Your scent ever inviting
My desire builds

I reach for you
Feeling your warmth
You were made just for me
Satisfying me like no other

I wait as long as I can
Controlling my need
Wanting you terribly
Unable to wait

My hands trembling
My lips burning
Your delicious taste
I greedily drink in

Without you, coffee
I'd never get out of bed
If I could just learn to wait
I wouldn't burn my mouth
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Comments: 34

Chuck M. Jul 5, 2008, 8:29am EDT
Nice take on a different kind of romance! lol I like it. Nice job!
Vic Needs Coffee Jul 5, 2008, 8:29am EDT
Thank you.
Sherrie H. Jul 5, 2008, 8:38am EDT
Cute twist. I didn't see it coming until the end.
Donna S. Jul 5, 2008, 9:13am EDT
ha ha bahaaa! you had me at coffee!
Rebecca S. Jul 5, 2008, 9:13am EDT
Very cute. I thought it was about a lover not coffee. lol Great poem.
Robin G. Jul 5, 2008, 9:41am EDT
OMG!!!! Too funny... after the 1st 2 stanzas I thought of coffee ...we think alike.
Robin G. Jul 5, 2008, 9:43am EDT
Thank You for sharing this on PointMonster
Vic Needs Coffee Jul 5, 2008, 9:44am EDT
Just having some morning fun...lol.
Angela <:3---}~~~~ M. Jul 5, 2008, 9:49am EDT
dropping by to leave you a 10! Have a happy Saturday!
Sue M. Jul 5, 2008, 10:07am EDT
LOL... clever, Vic!
Rebecca [Future Teacher] Jul 5, 2008, 10:13am EDT
Great poem, I loved the ending.
Sassy ... the calm and cool Cat Jul 5, 2008, 10:36am EDT
I should try coffee sometime. I don't know what I'm missing
Vic Needs Coffee Jul 5, 2008, 10:38am EDT
I can't function without coffee...lol.
Donna S. Jul 5, 2008, 10:49am EDT
Morning fun, afternoon delight what comes next?
Chelsea R. Jul 5, 2008, 11:35am EDT
great poem! good morning! :)
Christopher Cole Jul 5, 2008, 12:05pm EDT
Fantastic poem! reminds me of one I wrote:

Coffee Time...

Your aroma is dark and rich

Your texture smooth and silky

Without you I am quite a bitch

My tastes run sweet and milky

Sometimes you are sharp and chic

Sometimes fragile and flaky

Your flavor robust not weak

Your body warm and caky

Your smell is exhilerating

Your taste is devastating

Your effect is regulating

I am your slave

You make me behave

You make my heart race

I love you for your taste

I love you for your effect

Without you I am a wreck

My dear sweet ...chocolate cookie.


christopher cole
Vic Needs Coffee Jul 5, 2008, 12:42pm EDT
Very cool Christopher. Great minds think alike.
Roxanne N. Jul 5, 2008, 3:32pm EDT
Love it. You did a great job. If you can turn me on with a poem about coffee what does that say about me??
Beth G. Jul 5, 2008, 4:58pm EDT
lol too funny. Thanks for sharing Vic!
Linda B. Jul 5, 2008, 7:13pm EDT
All my coworkers know not to ask me anything in the morning until I have been sighted walking back to my office with coffee in hand (I use a latte mug as my cup of choice). We have three flavors--decaf, Hotel blend ("leaded") and Medium Roast ("high test").
I take "high test", oversize tank, with 4 on the floor (4 Splenda packets).

They all think I'm weird because of my love of language and how I use it, but hey--when someone looks at me that way, I just remark that I'm providing the entertainment and I'll be doing another set around lunchtime. Usually gets a chuckle and I slither on back to my office....
Donald M. Jul 5, 2008, 9:29pm EDT
You had me there for a while. Thought you werre talking about your wife or girlfriend.
Actually I feel like that too. First thing in the morning I want my coffee.
Selene N. Jul 5, 2008, 10:57pm EDT
LOL! Wonderful! I totally thought it would end a different way.
Vic Needs Coffee Jul 6, 2008, 6:09am EDT
I don't mind one bit, if anything I'm flattered.
Lilith Dorsey Jul 6, 2008, 2:20pm EDT
All hail caffeina!!
Dagmara H. Jul 6, 2008, 8:08pm EDT
Love it.
Lois R. Jul 11, 2008, 11:57pm EDT
Loved the sentiment, but can't stand the smell or taste of coffee! Maybe I'll have to write about diet Pepsi!
Jennifer N. Jul 12, 2008, 2:31am EDT
Great poem, I can't relate to the sentiment, but it's well written.
Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Jul 12, 2008, 5:07pm EDT
o_- Funny
Dawn J. Jul 13, 2008, 6:42pm EDT
lol, great job....heres a ten for you!
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Jul 17, 2008, 6:43pm EDT
LOL, that's awesome. :)
Donna T. Jul 29, 2008, 1:45pm EDT
This is a great poem! I love the surprise!

I'm wondering how many cups of coffee you drink a day...........................LOL
Abby N. Aug 6, 2008, 4:05am EDT
beautiful poem!
Very fun. Trying to help out with page views. Hope your weekend is going well.
Eric T. Jan 15, 2009, 8:53pm EST
This one got me! *lol* Good one.

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