by Amanda S.

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I Want To Be Like...

July 03, 2008 05:22 PM EDT

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I want to be like the waves on the sea,

like the clouds in the wind,

but I'm me.

One day I'll jump out of my skin.

I'll shake the sky like a hundred violins.

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Comments: 18

Amanda S. Jul 3, 2008, 5:23pm EDT

Don't ask me how I came up with this one,I had these words running through my head all night and finally giving up on sleep I wrote them down,I was able to sleep after that.

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edna r. Jul 3, 2008, 5:38pm EDT

a 10 for you.

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Robin M. Jul 3, 2008, 5:39pm EDT

i like it

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Katie R. Jul 3, 2008, 5:45pm EDT

10

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Rhetta A. Jul 3, 2008, 5:47pm EDT

I really like this one, especially shaking the sky like a hundred violins. Very evocative.

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Adelaide M. Jul 3, 2008, 6:07pm EDT

I like the violins too, great visual.

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Susan S. Jul 3, 2008, 6:11pm EDT

i love it

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Dawn S. Jul 3, 2008, 7:05pm EDT

Very nice!

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Ginny H. Jul 3, 2008, 8:11pm EDT

Very pretty poem!

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Mary G. Jul 3, 2008, 11:26pm EDT

10

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**AngelEyez** a. Jul 4, 2008, 12:00am EDT

10

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Sylvia W. Jul 4, 2008, 12:08am EDT

Nice, I like it. Keep em' coming!

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Diane "stormyz" B. Jul 4, 2008, 9:01pm EDT

Here's a 10 for you!! Thank you for posting this to the Gimme 10!!! Group

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Michelle W. Jul 5, 2008, 10:51am EDT

Very nice, I want to be like a star, that dances and shines and brings delight!

peace

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Amanda S. Jul 7, 2008, 4:08pm EDT

Thank you for commenting on this.
I'm glad so many of you liked it.

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Laura C. Jul 19, 2008, 3:18pm EDT

this one was really good too.

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Deborah R. May 19, 2009, 5:11pm EDT

Really nice.

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Amanda S. May 19, 2009, 6:36pm EDT

Thank you for commenting on this poem,I'm glad you all like it so well.

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