In First Place, Sujata S. with "Independence" - Reach for the
Reach for Independence, the sky is not the limit
Eclectic 'n' alight evoking absolute potentially hysteric !
Kindling all unto childish lighting the frolics, frisking,
Rocketing robust of bouncing - arresting - flexing spree . . .
The different shades of displaying 'Brilliance'
Are the different strengths exhibited tinsels
The works of fire in varying degrees !!
As if known 'n' not known Intelligence of every student
Conquering vital joyous expression relevant
Being a child can we learn 'n' be jubilant
A 'Fun' of creativity portrayed not blundered . . .
Vying with importance of "Independence" Day
Potential to Merry-go-round louder
Of multiple strength the 'Fireworks' speak spectacular
Amusing we do fail to understand the same way
Of the 'Intelligence' in students not different is a wonder !!!
The formal system of schooling or education
Squarely queer waking from slumber
To observe in identifying multiple intelligence
Honouring Independence of child's independent culture
In a classroom of different kind left out untutored !
As marking memorable moments, the Fireworks fumble 'n' fume
Multiple muse as if a riddle solved or framed as collage head o' heels !!
Kindling the need of 'Informal learning so far
Approaches flexibly 'n' naturally letting way not different
The child's intelligence kin-aesthetic or visual-spatial
Ability sensitive to harness indeed the true potential !!!
And reach for the sky I told you why to see
Frying the fireworks trying on the sky hysteric
And wonder not why they twinkle 'n' die up above
Evocative 'Independence' elite is not the limit . . .


Comments: 47
always welcome your style
of enhncing words tie !!
Thank you Chas ... !!!
Thank you Susan ...!!!
Thank you Kimber ...!!!
thank you Manomano...
Blessings...
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And you did it so well 'n' sweetly !!
Thank you immensely necee !!!
very expressive poetry,,, well done,,,
best Celebration 'n' Jubilations !!
Thank you profoundly for stopping by to give in
kind words of compliment enhancing the work !!!
Independent Jubilations to accord with !!!
Dear Ed ...!!!
Dear Renee ...!!!
Your lines: "Potential to Merry-go-round louder / Of multiple strength the 'Fireworks' speak spectacular / Amusing we do fail to understand the same way"
Life is different. I always look for your poetry. I always endeavor to "get" what you're putting down. We are a carnival of people. We have joy boundless, and strength, as Americans. I value your take on this holiday of ours.
Yes, we are a weird and different "collage." We take some pride in that~~we call it our "melting pot mentality."
Your lines: "Honouring Independence of child's independent culture / In a classroom of different kind left out untutored !" (yes, we still have some work to do in our "educating.") We SAY we are proud of our educational system, but we tend to strive for too much conformity in that arena. We need more and more and better teachers (who care to teach without stiffling the artistic spirit of our children.)
Blessings, my friend. Good write.
Wilka
Happy that you are back to comment fulfilling the worthy gap of inspiring as true friend
as one who is truely close and knows the sentiments situations provide !!!
Be happy and true Blessed one
Sujata / mano-n-mamo !!!
Wow I love the short name "Suji" as friends her call me Vinay !!!
Thanks Bhawana ...!!!
Thanks Greatly Mike too !!!
Dear Andea ...!!!
Dear David for giving in aptly ...!!!
Dear Amy ...!!!
In the Will of Independence individual
And perfect thought movement of 4th July Celebrations real !!!
And bow to you in Namaste
That you greatly felt Good to wish me Today !!!
giving in joy to add words kindly !!!
Worthy to timely read and give in kind words in appreciation !
Your love enhances the write to win !!
Dear friends Bethany and Bhawana !!!
I have you marked so that when you post a poem, I am notified (((This old gal, she's a-learning new tricks!!! Smiles)))
Wilka
we are here venting out our Best in deed is Worth Blessed one !!!
Our need is vise-a-versa so fulfilling that you remind me of benevolent One
The Almighty !!!
the actual mood dear Sheila greatly Thank you !!!
Thank you so immensely friends ...
Thank you Kimber to have acknowledged so aptly ...!!!
Thank you friend Austin ...!!!
Thank you dear teacher and ernest poet John Lovingly ...!!!