June 22nd2008
The dawn comes swooping, smearing shades of grey
On grey and deeper grey. The ill-formed clouds
Take fright and flee like endless ghostly herds.
Stampeding from the hunter of the sky.
Fully-rigged the jiggling trees cling tight to earth,
Boughs bouncing, roaring like a waterfall,
They huddle, bend, explode and wildly flail
Their lashing limbs, cavorting. Back and forth
The flowering-cherry sapling bucks and bows
And flings its spindly arms around in grief,
Or like a captive pleading for her life,
As every leaf turns inside out and shows
Her paler underside. The hosta swirls
Like seaweed under tugging shallow waves
At turn of tide. Flashing photinia leaves
Show red for danger, rattling dragon scales.
The peony is stripped, defrocked, her petals
Torn away, the fabric ripped, as wide-eyed
Nicotiana shiver at each fusillade,
And flinch to face such fierce, unequal battles -
Defiantly petunias flaunt their flags,
To taunt the elemental force majeure,
Those hueless banners of the charging air,
That sky-wide stream of shabby, shapeless rags.
And through the night loud whispers, cries and moans
Surround the house until at last the stars,
Those distant, fiery, cold-eyed arbiters
Appear to signal truce. The wind declines.


Comments: 29
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Quite vivid, Mike.
Thanks.
This is so descriptive! Poor peonies and hostas!
I love how the dawn arrives like a large swooping bird!!!
The elemental activity in the content is magnificently penned with superb detail and clarity. You've written so many outstanding poems, but I think this one is your best. Bravo, Mike!
Today, I am privileged to stumble upon this awesome poem!
Very expressive, and vivid! Extraordinary writing, Mike.