by The Honorable Robbie Flynn, Governor of Robbieland...
Member since:
November 1, 2006

Love with Commitment

June 22, 2008 10:21 PM EDT
views: 56 | rating: 8.3/10 (11 votes) | comments: 10

Im in poetic mode.... 

 

The burning fire in her eyes lights my soul

The love in her heart makes me lose control

I live life loving every minute

I live loving her, she is the one

I see in her the passion and devotion of a lover

She is the light of my world

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Comments: 10

Ginny H. Jun 22, 2008, 10:28pm EDT
Sweet poem =D.
meg pattinson Jun 22, 2008, 10:34pm EDT
aw.. that is very sweet Robbie !
*LORA* M. Jun 22, 2008, 10:52pm EDT
excellent
There is no lady,,, Im single again.... we dropped our love yesterday, and im not sad at all!!!!
Elise w. Jun 23, 2008, 5:55pm EDT
Sounds as though you remain friends. It's good when people can do that. Glad you're not broken up about it. Life/love continues..... :-)
M & M. Jun 24, 2008, 3:24pm EDT
Well written, just so lovely. Reading what you wrote above, I'm sorry for the breakup. However, if you are happy about it, than I am glad for you. Have a great day. Look over the rainbow, more great times ahead.
Rachael G. Jun 24, 2008, 3:27pm EDT
You sound like a romantic.
Glome . . . Jun 30, 2008, 12:00am EDT
What!? You wrote that poem and you're already over her??? :):) That's young love.
Laura C. Jul 15, 2008, 1:18pm EDT
very nice!!!

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