by Teri V.
Member since:
December 18, 2007

Poem: Dreaming

June 22, 2008 08:06 PM EDT
views: 60 | comments: 15

Dreaming
I never want to wake up
floating across the sky
with my rainbow wings in flight

Here I can see
The Crystal Palace Inside
of me

Dreaming I really See Myself
I don't want to wake up
into the world where its not just me
and you

lets just live in my dreams
and fly and be free

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Comments: 15

Michele M. Jun 22, 2008, 8:22pm EDT
Nice poem.
Sharon P. Jun 22, 2008, 8:25pm EDT
It is nice.
Rae M. Jun 22, 2008, 8:38pm EDT
There a definately some dreams that I would like to stay in. Nice poem.
Rony J. Jun 22, 2008, 11:14pm EDT
Really nice
God Bless
Ann Weaver Hart Jun 24, 2008, 11:49am EDT
Lovely.
Amy C. Jun 24, 2008, 1:40pm EDT
very nice
Wendy W. Jun 24, 2008, 7:17pm EDT
Thank you for allowing me to share this dream....My own interpretation is you are a butterfly with a safe haven locked inside. This is where you find peace...... and where you keep your love warm. Beautiful.
Mary G. Jun 25, 2008, 6:04pm EDT
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poetrandy R. Jun 30, 2008, 1:58am EDT
I like it, Teri -- Good work!
Austin Cushing Jun 30, 2008, 8:45pm EDT
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Renee (Pres of Baby James Foundation) ~. Jul 4, 2008, 11:52am EDT
Beautiful I could handle some of these dreams
Shelbia C. Jul 10, 2008, 1:46am EDT
This is a really nice poem.
Lawrence U. Jul 20, 2008, 12:27am EDT
Lovely poem!

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