yearning----love poetry

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Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Jun 18, 2008, 11:22am EDT

Lovely!

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Mary McCartt Jun 18, 2008, 11:43am EDT

This is a different facet of you, Gautami. Pleasantly surprised with this earthy, passionate poem. I like it.

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Paul M. Jun 18, 2008, 11:44am EDT

Nice.

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Max Babi Jun 18, 2008, 12:01pm EDT

There's soulful aroma to these words, Gautami.
Like Mary said above, the poem is earthy and passionate.
Very good, lets see more!
Cheerz!

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Richard Melendez Jun 18, 2008, 12:30pm EDT

Gautami... very passionate and full. You must do more poetry. I especially like the phrase, "the inherent aroma that is you".

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Vicky P. Jun 18, 2008, 12:48pm EDT

Very passionate.

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Debra C. Jun 18, 2008, 4:59pm EDT

A mature, thoughtful passion that draws the reader.

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Alison H. Jun 19, 2008, 1:49am EDT

I can feel the heat! Nice one, Gautami.

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Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jun 25, 2008, 8:13am EDT

Impressive indeed Gautami !!!

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Jewel Hughes Jun 29, 2008, 2:35pm EDT

This is nice I enjoy reading stuff like this.
Thank You for sharing.
Jewel
http://jewels-ebooks-4-u.com

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