by Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom'
Member since:
April 25, 2007

One day ~

June 18, 2008 04:09 AM EDT (Updated: June 18, 2008 04:12 AM EDT)
views: 161 | rating: 10/10 (37 votes) | comments: 39

 


One day my song will touch your forehead
Kissing your soul
Today is not that day.

One day my words will whisper in your ears
Touching your spirit
Today is not that day.

One day my voice will silence in death
Speaking to your heart
Today is not that day.

One day you'll believe in my love
Searching my face
Today is not that day.

 

 
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Comments: 39

Kathryn E. Jun 18, 2008, 4:22am EDT
One day, all dreams will come true.

Your article is Featured in the Triple Name Club.
sharon SugarMomma is a wise woman, Jun 18, 2008, 4:25am EDT
Maybe soon, eh?

Beautiful.
yes I agree, very beautiful Bhawana...................
Marianne R. Jun 18, 2008, 6:40am EDT
Very nice :-)
donna h. Jun 18, 2008, 7:21am EDT
Morning Bhawana
j - Frugal Mom - r. Jun 18, 2008, 8:23am EDT
This is wonderful Bhawana.
Spencer T. Jun 18, 2008, 8:33am EDT
A perfect match of words and image stirring the soul.

Good stuff.
David W. Jun 18, 2008, 9:39am EDT
A swirl of wrods that whisper emotion and tocuh the heart.
~Sia McKye~ Jun 18, 2008, 10:22am EDT
I really like this Bhawana. give you a lot to think about.
Kerrell g. Jun 18, 2008, 11:21am EDT
Great job, B!
Kay M. Jun 18, 2008, 12:13pm EDT
Wonderful Bhawana. But your words always touch my spirit.
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jun 18, 2008, 12:57pm EDT
Beautiful Bhawana.
necee t. Jun 18, 2008, 1:17pm EDT
very beautiful dear Bhawana...
everything you write is wonderful...
Blessings always... love you...
Curt L. Jun 18, 2008, 1:24pm EDT
This is lovely, Bhawana!
Phyllis R. Jun 18, 2008, 1:52pm EDT
Oh B (aka Ms "Cool Member, congrats by the way) this is so beautiful, - I really enjoyed this one!!!!! :o)
Larry H. Jun 18, 2008, 2:54pm EDT
very nice thanks for sharing your poem
Marge H. Jun 18, 2008, 5:47pm EDT
Very beautiful. I hope the words are heard soon. At least we have heard them here.
Alison H. Jun 18, 2008, 5:59pm EDT
Beautiful poem! The repetition is wonderful.
Corinna Parr Jun 18, 2008, 6:28pm EDT
And this is beautiful too... the words matched perfectly to the image.
Alison Pearce Jun 18, 2008, 7:12pm EDT
Gorgeous work!
Marie J. R. Jun 18, 2008, 8:17pm EDT
my goodness dear Bhawana,,, this is super,,, I so like this,,, Bless you,,,
Ellie !. Jun 18, 2008, 11:42pm EDT
Beautiful. I hope someday soon!
Richard Melendez Jun 19, 2008, 1:36am EDT
Bhawana... the poetry is yearning and hopeful. The photo adds richly to the words.
elizabeth e. Jun 19, 2008, 4:35am EDT
Do all dreams come true?
BEAUTIFUL BHAWANA. Quite touching I think
Elsie Duggan Jun 19, 2008, 12:29pm EDT
lovely Bhawana, I think we all wait for "the day"
Deb J. Jun 19, 2008, 1:55pm EDT
Once more my dear friend Bhawana you have portrayed a feeling perfectly!! Thank you...you are so talented!
*LORA* M. Jun 20, 2008, 12:24am EDT
awesome
Donald M. Jun 21, 2008, 11:58am EDT
You are such a great writer Bhawana, so talented.
Ashley P. Jun 21, 2008, 2:58pm EDT
Today is not that day- very touching. Well done.
Ravichanthran P. Jun 26, 2008, 3:23pm EDT
Nice melancholy!
Sheila Deeth Jul 11, 2008, 3:56pm EDT
Wow! This is beautiful Bhawana!
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Sep 14, 2008, 10:35am EDT
Ah, sweetly wistful.
PURUSHOTHAMA RAO R. Nov 15, 2008, 11:58pm EST
Every day
a poem smiles
beautifully in the forum
from your finger tipped
key board
mousing into the musing hearts
-----------------kudos

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