by Sarah (I want points)
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January 12, 2007

Haiku: Outside and Inside

June 21, 2008 09:39 AM EDT
views: 106 | rating: 9.9/10 (60 votes) | comments: 63
Outside life is sunny, warm
But inside is Gathering
What a dilemma
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Comments: 63

c.l.m. 180˚ Jun 21, 2008, 9:52am EDT
here's a point ... :)
Beth G. Jun 21, 2008, 10:20am EDT
lol cute haiku, thanks for sharing Sarah!
Mary M. Jun 21, 2008, 10:34am EDT
So true:-)
Kathryn E. Jun 21, 2008, 10:55am EDT
very nice, hon.
Diane "stormyz" B. Jun 21, 2008, 11:00am EDT
nice!
Selene N. Jun 21, 2008, 11:09am EDT
LOL.... If you have a laptop, take it OUTSIDE!
Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Jun 21, 2008, 11:19am EDT
A few too many syllables in the first line but still a good point made.
Donna S. Jun 21, 2008, 11:43am EDT
Very true
J W. Jun 21, 2008, 11:50am EDT
good haiku
.* Sandi * Jun 21, 2008, 12:20pm EDT
nice one
thanks
Sujata (funnily 'Suji' ) S. Jun 21, 2008, 12:54pm EDT
Well done ! Thank you !!!
JoAnn C. Jun 21, 2008, 1:04pm EDT
so true
Bonnie H. Jun 21, 2008, 1:38pm EDT
very sweet
Teri V. Jun 21, 2008, 1:55pm EDT
nice
Cheryl W. Jun 21, 2008, 3:41pm EDT
Oh...can I ever relate to this!...:)
Sharon P. Jun 21, 2008, 3:52pm EDT
So true.
Terry Collett Jun 21, 2008, 3:56pm EDT
strue.
Austin Cushing Jun 21, 2008, 4:06pm EDT
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Donna Hammett-Tooker Jun 21, 2008, 4:10pm EDT
Nice expression.
necee t. Jun 21, 2008, 4:14pm EDT
wow, that's really cute... what a dilemma... cool... Bless you...
pamela r. Jun 21, 2008, 4:54pm EDT
very cute
Georgiana S. Jun 21, 2008, 4:57pm EDT
Outside is 110 degrees, inside is a fan! LOL
Rae M. Jun 21, 2008, 6:08pm EDT
I hear ya!
Sharon B. Jun 21, 2008, 6:15pm EDT
lol
Elaine S. Jun 21, 2008, 6:42pm EDT
nice
I went to a park today while it was clear weather...now it's cloudy and the rain is coming, so I decided to join the "gathering". Nice haiku.
Maurice K. Jun 21, 2008, 8:38pm EDT
Cute
René Allen Jun 21, 2008, 8:50pm EDT
Short and sweet Sarah.

Blessings ~
Rene
lena k. Jun 21, 2008, 9:19pm EDT
so true
Shaunee C. Jun 21, 2008, 9:31pm EDT
Very nice and very true
Kimber F. Jun 21, 2008, 9:44pm EDT
Cute, what a tough choice. LOL
blaine d. Jun 21, 2008, 10:02pm EDT
nice one!
Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jun 21, 2008, 10:26pm EDT
Hello,
Just checking my email and saw yours so thought I'd come check it out to let you know I was here.
Just stopped by....
Kimber L. Jun 21, 2008, 10:30pm EDT
this is a great haiku!!!!
Keisha V. Jun 21, 2008, 11:03pm EDT
cute!
Jan S. Jun 22, 2008, 12:48am EDT
Well done. It is a dilemma!
RJ H. Jun 22, 2008, 1:19am EDT
I love this! LOL!!


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mary J. Jun 22, 2008, 4:52am EDT
True...
Shirley U Understand Me S. Jun 22, 2008, 5:14am EDT
nice 10...thanks
Patti M. Jun 22, 2008, 6:28am EDT
I know from where you speak. My husband will call me and say, ""it's nice out stop Gathering for a few minutes and sit outside in the fresh air."
Patti M. Jun 22, 2008, 6:29am EDT
Thank you for the comment on my smoothie. I hope you like it.
CRYSTAL C. Jun 22, 2008, 1:14pm EDT
DB10
Ashley P. Jun 22, 2008, 1:37pm EDT
Both sound fun. Let's gather outside. Hehe. Good one, Sarah
A K. Jun 22, 2008, 7:03pm EDT
so true!
Lawrence U. Jun 22, 2008, 8:38pm EDT
Lovely poem!
Mary Ann S. Jun 22, 2008, 8:39pm EDT
Ha ha. I love it.
Sophiya S. Jun 22, 2008, 10:51pm EDT
kool
Amy C. Jun 23, 2008, 9:09am EDT
I tried taking my laptop outside on Saturday it did not work!
I do know what you mean!
Christine H. Jun 23, 2008, 11:54am EDT
So true!
Alison H. Jun 23, 2008, 12:42pm EDT
Ha ha ha! I've been in that dilemma.....
Sandre M. Jun 23, 2008, 2:28pm EDT
Good one!
Heather W. Jun 23, 2008, 3:17pm EDT
Nice haiku
Chas Andrews Jun 23, 2008, 4:36pm EDT
haha
Curt L. Jun 24, 2008, 7:25pm EDT
Fun poem, Sarah!
Erin O'Riordan Jun 25, 2008, 9:01am EDT
And who among us hasn't been there?
Angela A. Jun 25, 2008, 8:00pm EDT
I got a chuckle out of this because it's so true!
donna h. Jun 25, 2008, 9:44pm EDT
hi there
Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jun 27, 2008, 10:47pm EDT
10
Claudia (kitty-cat) K. Jun 27, 2008, 11:26pm EDT
Nice thought.
Janice Haskins Jun 28, 2008, 7:17am EDT
That's a 10!
Tracey Lapham Jul 29, 2008, 12:33pm EDT
a very cute poem :)

i am not one to criticize...but for next time, the syllable breakdown for a kaiku is 7, 5, 7. not that it matter; art is art!

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