by poetrandy R.
Member since:
June 4, 2008

June's Three Haiku Poems

June 12, 2008 03:32 PM EDT
views: 63 | rating: 9.9/10 (8 votes) | comments: 8

Summer Days Haiku

 

on warm summer days

it seems we are at peace 

then the TV comes on

 

 

 

 

Vibrations Haiku

 

vibrations of atoms

build the foundations of earth

let's not destroy it

 

 

 

 

Weather Haiku

 

weather changes drastically

as autumn leaves begin to fall 

then winter descends

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Comments: 8

Beth G. Jun 12, 2008, 4:48pm EDT
These were really great! Thanks for sharing Randy!
Mary Ann S. Jun 12, 2008, 11:30pm EDT
I like these. Thanks.
Amy H. Jun 13, 2008, 12:45am EDT
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Sandra T. Jun 13, 2008, 12:19pm EDT
Beautiful Haiku Randy!
Carole S. Jun 17, 2008, 6:13pm EDT
Haikus are based on a 5-7-5 syllable pattern and a couple of these did not have the correct count....but what you had to say was good.
Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Jun 21, 2008, 1:11pm EDT
Good thoughts, don't worry about the 5-7-5
Founding Editor Jul 11, 2008, 8:00pm EDT
no one really follows the 5-7-5 count anymore. Your thoughts are well formulated.
Founding Editor Jul 11, 2008, 8:01pm EDT
Your first poem is the strongest, I like the tone

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