by amy s.
Member since:
March 9, 2007

little white lies

June 09, 2008 01:08 PM EDT
views: 96 | comments: 42

This is a warm up exercise done to warm up the soul and mind to be able to write for a certain topic. You should try to write this. After I was done I felt cooler than when I begin. Make sure you make everything a white lie. 

It is terribly cold today.

There are snow flakes comming down.

I love to catch snowflakes on my toungue.

The weather is fridget.

i need to bundle up.

my hair is turning to ice particles and i feel like they are going to fall off

the room where i sit is nice and toasty.

my but is burning from sitting on the chair.

life is no good when it is down right cold

the snow is pilling up outside

the snow is getting to the windows

the snow covers the windows with a fresh white blanket of snow

this is the weather for ice tea and ice coffee

I sure love to eat the snow especially the yellow kind

 

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Comments: 42

Tory H. Jun 9, 2008, 1:33pm EDT
The last line is a little gross! lol ;)
Charlene C. Jun 9, 2008, 1:39pm EDT
Yellow snow? gotta dog? Here's 10 for ya!
**AngelEyez** a. Jun 9, 2008, 1:49pm EDT
thats cool .. thanks for sharing.and its a good idea
amy s. Jun 9, 2008, 3:03pm EDT
your welcome remember it is all little white lies
suey v. Jun 9, 2008, 3:10pm EDT
Nice poem.....I'm still sweating my a** off. LOL
Beverly P. Jun 9, 2008, 3:12pm EDT
I hope the yellow snow is a big black lie! LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Judy Kiser Jun 9, 2008, 3:16pm EDT
Hard to think of snow on this 94 degree day. But I gave it a try. :) It's a good idea.
Sharon P. Jun 9, 2008, 3:29pm EDT
Interesting. We still have snow in the mountains, fell yesterday.
April H. Jun 9, 2008, 3:36pm EDT
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Sandy M. Jun 9, 2008, 3:39pm EDT
I like your poems. nice job.
Lyn Owen Jun 9, 2008, 3:52pm EDT
My Mother always told us not to eat the yellow snow.
Diane S. Jun 9, 2008, 3:54pm EDT
i thought yellow snow had been peed on. am i crazy?
amy s. Jun 9, 2008, 4:09pm EDT
no Diane you are not crazy yellow snow is peed on snow than it might in the case of this poem be mountain dew snow. lol. It was just a crazy way to get people to talk and get the poem out there. I hope you all are staying nice and cold durning these hot days.
Sharon B. Jun 9, 2008, 4:23pm EDT
I don't think I want to think about eating yellow snow even if it will cool me down.
Maurice K. Jun 9, 2008, 4:25pm EDT
The bit with the yellow snow was off, but the suggestion of winter time in the current weather was a nice touch.
Laura H. Jun 9, 2008, 5:00pm EDT
Amy, this is interesting.
amy s. Jun 9, 2008, 5:15pm EDT
thanks everyone for your wonderful suggestions. i promise i will not mention y snow again.
Warren Adler Jun 9, 2008, 5:27pm EDT
Several good images (yellow snow aside!) on this very hot day.
barb n. Jun 9, 2008, 5:31pm EDT
funny, good thought for hot day!!! sorry, warren, didnt mean to duplicate, but it is HOT here too!!!
Amy H. Jun 9, 2008, 5:48pm EDT
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Nyota *Star* Jun 9, 2008, 5:54pm EDT
ha ha. It's over 80% in Detroit today and that's the truth! It was 90% a few days before!
Juan J Martinez Jun 9, 2008, 6:38pm EDT
Think cool!
Jan S. Jun 9, 2008, 6:48pm EDT
Great poem with a funny ending. "Beware of little white lies. Mosquitoes drink more blood than lions."
Austin Cushing Jun 9, 2008, 6:49pm EDT
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Andrea (Ms. Conservative) L. Jun 9, 2008, 7:53pm EDT
Good idea
Beth G. Jun 9, 2008, 8:37pm EDT
lol@ the yellow snow at the end. what a gotcha!
Melissa M. Jun 9, 2008, 8:50pm EDT
cute!
Georgiana S. Jun 9, 2008, 10:17pm EDT
Like that old Twilight Zone where the woman wa burning up and in reality hd a fever and was in her bed with a killer snowstorm ending the world outside!
Sunaura *. Jun 9, 2008, 10:57pm EDT
lol
Rodney R. Jun 9, 2008, 11:22pm EDT
Frank Zappa says "don't you eat that yellow snow"
Sophiya S. Jun 10, 2008, 3:24pm EDT
very neat
(The Other) Dale C. Jun 10, 2008, 5:42pm EDT
Kind of a wee bit of self hypnosis.
BLAGOVESTA P. Jun 10, 2008, 6:49pm EDT
REMEMBER FRANK ZAPPA???
Angela A. Jun 10, 2008, 10:21pm EDT
That's a good idea. I do the same exercise in the winter by imagining myself by a toasty fire and it works wonders to keep me warm. I will think frosty thoughts this summer and see if it works.
Donna S. Jun 13, 2008, 10:11pm EDT
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~*~Danyale~*~ N. Jun 30, 2008, 10:06pm EDT
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Wanda H. Jun 30, 2008, 11:30pm EDT
I am trying to catch all of your articles before the deadline tonight. So, I will be leaving this generic comment. But please believe me when I say that I am enjoying your interesting articles, every one.

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