Three Senryu Poems

Senryu 1

those girls talk too much

when they gather together

excluding all boys

Senryu 2

time has come to stop

complaining about all this

let our lives begin

Senryu 3

fun is fun but not

when I'm sad and depressed

soon I may not be

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Charlene C. Jun 8, 2008, 6:41pm EDT

interesting.

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John Doyle Jun 8, 2008, 6:46pm EDT

Good start. Remember (if I may) senyru are humerous or sarcastic Haiku

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poetrandy R. Jun 8, 2008, 6:53pm EDT

And supposedly about people, too! Is that correct John Doyle?

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Alison H. Jun 8, 2008, 7:04pm EDT

I especially enjoyed #1!

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John Philipp Jun 8, 2008, 7:54pm EDT

Excellent work, Randy.

Thanks.

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John Doyle Jun 8, 2008, 11:07pm EDT

Not always about people. To the best of my reconcilliation only of the classic poets wrote about peopls

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Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate Jun 9, 2008, 8:56am EDT

cute poems Randy

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Ernesto Pangilinan Santiago Jun 9, 2008, 9:47am EDT

Dear Poet,

My congratulations! "Three Senryu Poems" is currently featured on The Sound Of Poetry Review through Sunday, June 15, 2008. Please, keep submitting your poetry. Many thanks, the TSOPR Editor.

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poetrandy R. Jun 9, 2008, 2:22pm EDT

Thanks everyone for all the nuce comments. Thanks to you especially Ernesto for the feature!

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Sheila Deeth Jun 9, 2008, 2:47pm EDT

Interesting to learn about, and neat to read. Thanks.

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Rhetta A. Jun 9, 2008, 5:26pm EDT

Excellent poems:)

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Rosa See Ya Jun 9, 2008, 7:34pm EDT

So many types of poetry, but it's all good.

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Shelbia C. Jun 10, 2008, 2:41am EDT

You did well. I had forgotton what Senyru was. It has been a while. Thanks for the refresher.

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poetrandy R. Jun 10, 2008, 11:26am EDT

There is a form of Haiku named "American Haiku" where almost anything goes! I have written some of these with 17 words instead of 17 syllables! C. F. why not try one?

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