It isn't the entire maunscript, just the synopsis.
Ninty percent of my snippets were taken from this novel., including 'gossip', thus I've decided to post the novel's synopsis to give you the main idea of the plot, and let you have a short glimpse of the source of most of my snippets.
We do know very well that sometimes to write a synopsis or a cover letter, is more difficult than writing the novel itself, it might serve as an example too for such tedious tasks
"An African Sunset" Synopsis
Reuven Shatz, a young agronomist, joins a small Israeli diplomatic delegation in a West African country. He is sent there to replace an agricultural instructor whose term there reached its end. Hardly a week passes and he is already acquainted with the trivial disputes between the delegation's members.
Major Everon the agricultural delegation's head takes him "under his wings", keeps him away from the foreign office delegates, and does his best to adjust Shatz not just to the harsh local climate, but to the way of life that he leads over there too. As Shatz is supposed to replace Priel his predecessor as smoothly as possible, he is requested to work in correlation with him at the farm near the town of Dialo; thus he spends the few days up to the Priels' departure at their cottage as their guest. The delicate matter to accept him as their guest, is mediated quite rudely by Everon. During his stay with the Priels Shatz learns much about the rupture between his hosts and the rest of the delegation members; the strange way in which his predecessor is being exploited by Da-Silva, the local farm manager, and of Hilla, Priel's wife obssesive fear of that powerful man. He falls in love with Hilla, and conducts a very stragne and short love affair with her, that ends up to his bitter disappointment when the Priels leave. His evenings Shatz spends with his head of the delegation at the club, not far from Mouaka the capital; there he meets Janine, the young daughter of one of Everon's closest French associates. His flirt with Janine gets on Everon's nerves. Everon is terribly jelouse and makes up a scene during the ride back at 100 miles per hour, overturns alomst the car endangering their lives in a heated dispute. That dramtic scene brings Shatz's salvation in its wake. He frees himself completely from Everon's patronage and gets the support of the embassy staff, but has to face the consequences – a hearing at the embassy, before the ambassador who tries to solve in vain the dispute between Shatz and Everon. On the verge of being sent back home Shatz tightens his relationships with the rest of embassy members, and with Janine and her father, against the ambassador's strict orders.


Comments: 12
It is also obvious that you are a traveler Haim. It comes through in your writing.
It is also amazing to me that you are able to pull Snippets from this Novel. Really amazing. Your Snippets give no clue of the substance of this Novel unless you reveal it.
This is wonderfully written, and very intriguing.
Blessings ~
Rene
There are some typographical errors (I know, I'm one to talk, right?), so just thought I'd point out that you might want to run it through Word. ^_^
I love the synopsis, though. It definitely sounds like an intriguing and worth-while book to read. Let me know if you get it published. I love your snippets so much, how could I resist reading the entire manuscript?
Lovely. I have the most difficult time writing a synopsis, much easier to write a whole book of poetry. I think I'd like to see a movie of this - it reads so well.