by Rony J.
Member since:
February 26, 2008

My Life

June 03, 2008 08:47 PM EDT (Updated: June 26, 2008 02:54 PM EDT)
views: 39 | rating: 10/10 (14 votes) | comments: 12

Amazing beauty

hidden Beneath The ocean floor

Crystal waterfall

whisper in the air,

An impostor is crawling

underneath my skin,

patiently turn around

face your destiny,

Among our emptiness

The outcome 

Colossal journey

Eyes of a beholder

announcing a kiss of goodbye

Rose petals

falling from The Skies

Pinnacle of their flight

Scent of beauty,

mourning mist and the sunlight.

Welcome reality

Lions chasing you

malicious intent

bodily harming

your lifeless heart,

walking without purposed

in the middle of night...


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By: RONY JOSEPH
© RONY JOSEPH, All rights reserved.

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Comments: 12

Alisa Kerwood Jun 3, 2008, 9:15pm EDT
wow thats a good poem
Susan V. Jun 3, 2008, 9:36pm EDT
very nice!
Shelbia C. Jun 4, 2008, 1:56am EDT
Really nice poem.
Marie J. R. Jun 5, 2008, 3:42pm EDT
Bless you,,,,
JoAnne D. Jun 6, 2008, 9:57am EDT
Nice poem, thanks for the share.
**AngelEyez** a. Jun 8, 2008, 3:16pm EDT
beautiful words thanks for sharing
FRANK P. Jun 11, 2008, 9:55pm EDT
"An impostor is crawling underneath my skin..." Very strong Phraseology! I like very much.
Haim Kadman Jun 14, 2008, 2:28pm EDT
A great poem Rony, 'mourning mist...' Beautiful way of expressing your thoughts - thank you Rony.
Glome . . . Jun 15, 2008, 11:27am EDT
An impostor is crawling

underneath my skin,

Ah ha! I just noticed Frank chose the same two lines :) The words Haim chose are also very creative. Good job!
Derek R. Jun 16, 2008, 10:50pm EDT
You have a pretty exciting life
Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Jun 17, 2008, 2:08am EDT
Great description of your self reflection.
Sammie B. Jun 26, 2008, 9:37pm EDT
What a beautiful, heart-felt poem! Bravo.

Thanks for posting to Gather For Art.

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