by Rony J.
Member since:
February 26, 2008

I Fly Away

June 01, 2008 10:18 PM EDT (Updated: June 01, 2008 10:37 PM EDT)
views: 48 | comments: 12

 

 

On Straight arrow

I lost my sanity

in a twilight

predicting a rainy night

crystal drops orchestrating

musical ecstasy,

The Moonlight striving

around The belly of a beast,

Dreams are reachable

by holding on.

Unnamed moments of deception,

On The deepest alleys

my bear hands fought

for freedom of The mind,

strolling back  to my

inner sanctum,

beyond The light...

Voices from the past,

stay silent for a moment

Clouds gathered around

a silhouette coming across

A golden bridge

allowing The rest of my soul

catch a breath of pure air.

At the distance...

An illusion of becoming oneself,

Beneath a multitude of stars,

Our last vision of forgiveness

Almost became a reality...

 

 

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Comments: 12

Karen M. Jun 1, 2008, 10:56pm EDT
very powerful piece
Rony J. Jun 1, 2008, 10:59pm EDT
Thank you Karen
God Bless You
Glome . . . Jun 2, 2008, 3:03am EDT
Rony ... I kept trying but don't think I know exactly what's happening. Is the person haveing a nervouse breakdown really? Just depressed and trying to find himself?
I love it ... it is mysterious and exciting ... but I'm not sure why.
You alway write so well.
John Philipp Jun 2, 2008, 11:33am EDT
Well done, Rony.

I enjoyed this. Thanks.
vijay kumar Jun 2, 2008, 12:57pm EDT
'An illusion of becoming oneself,
Beneath a multitude of stars'...

Good one, Rony.
Sarah Honenberger Jun 2, 2008, 2:40pm EDT
Some very nice images, needs a little more connectedness to really make its mark. Did you mean to include 'to' in this line: 'catch a breath of pure air.'
Jennifer N. Jun 2, 2008, 4:31pm EDT
Beautifully written
Shelbia C. Jun 4, 2008, 1:58am EDT
Some great images and phrases. I like it.
Charity M. Jun 16, 2008, 9:56pm EDT
((( Visually powerful...)))
Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Jun 17, 2008, 2:02am EDT
Some real nice visual imagry. Much like an indistinct dream.
Boris L. Jun 26, 2008, 1:06am EDT
dream with the
outmost
intensity.
and may your dream
become a poem...
...
oh, this has happened

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