My Prayer For An Ancient Country (Pls Crit)

To the most beautiful people on earth.
To the people that You chose to embrace
To the people to whom You first showed love.

You gave them of Your breath and soul.
And when these people saw the light
And the beauty in their neighbours' eyes,
They responded in most wondrous ways.

They sang, danced and wrote sweet songs.
Great poetry still read today.
But these people have been racked with pain
And still today are left in torment.

I pray to You, Lord, please spare their lives
And above all protect their mothers,
The bearers of the nations' heart.
All the wealth and treasure You once gave.

Lord, we need their songs and dancing.
We need these more than ever now.
Allow them to live in peace.
Let them reflect the love that You gave.

Let them show to us Your bestowed love,
For we always need to hear again and again,
The music of Your gift to them.
We need to hear Your first loves' songs