This poem is dedicated to all The Soldiers Out There
The Stretch road walls
came crashing down
Nostalgic Wings
come to my rescue
we will overcome
by our own testimony
As The Grateful
sunshine gracefully
gives Himself to us
torn apart from
The immense
wave of hope.
There is no choice
to bowed heads
on a sign of respect
They willingly sacrifice
a lifetime of dreams
to protect and served
frantically pondering
on a twilight of
misconceptions
periodically dying
for a lost cause of hope.
D day has drifted
to another tearful
journey bringing a painful
remembrance of souls
from The past when
fear has left an empty
feel of surrender
in The name
of freedom....
Rony Joseph
RONY JOSEPH All rights reserved


Comments: 10
I have some suggestions for edits . . .
On stretch road walls ~ to ~ The Stretch road walls
give himself to us ~ to ~ gives Himself to us
to bowed our heads ~ to ~ to bowed heads
The past were fear ~ to ~ The past where fear
has left and empty feel ~ to ~ has left an empty feel
Then it will read like this . . .
This One is for all The Soldiers out there
The stretch road walls
came crashing down
through a glimpse of
understanding
Nostalgic Wings
come to my rescue
and we will overcome
by our own testimony
As The Grateful
sunshine gracefully
gives Himself to us
torn apart from
The immense wave
of hope.
There is no choice
to bowed heads
on a sign of respect
They willingly sacrifice
a lifetime of dreams
to protect and served
frantically pondering
on a twilight of
misconceptions
periodically dying
for a lost cause of hope
D day has drifted
to another tearful
journey bringing a painful
remembrance of souls from
The past where fear
has left an empty feel
of surrender in The name
of freedom....
by Rony Joseph
RONY JOSEPH ©2008 ~ All rights reserved
God Bless you
God Bless You
Blessings ~
Rene
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