by Haim Kadman
Member since:
July 21, 2007

The last meal?

May 24, 2008 06:19 AM UTC
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'I hope it isn't our 'last meal'   she  remarked, ~

 

as they sat down

 

breaking the 'thin layer of frost'

 

~ that seemed to reign

 

already in the dinning room.

Comments: 7

René Allen May 24, 2008, 6:32am UTC
Haim ~ The perfect "28" RELATIONSHIP Style Snippet!

GOOD JOB ON THIS!

Blessings ~
René
Haim Kadman May 24, 2008, 8:29am UTC
Thank so much Rene for your encouragement and instruction.
Haim Kadman May 25, 2008, 10:19am UTC
Hello Sierra, thank you first of all. My snippets are taken from my short stories and my novels. All the recent ones are from my novel 'An African sunset'. I've posted 10 excerpts among my articles with different titles that suited each one of these excerpts, such as 'The flare-up', 'The dinner party' (1), 'Getting to know her', 'An unexpected crush' and six more. As this novel is still no more than a manuscript, which I wish to publish; I don't intend to post more, but you can have a very good idea about the plot, by reading these excerpts.
Charity B. May 27, 2008, 4:14am UTC
((( 'Frost reigns" waht a truth to desert eing the 'last meal'...I love that meal!)))
Haim Kadman May 27, 2008, 10:25am UTC
It depends on what dishes it consists... Thank you dear Charity.
Shelbia C. Aug 12, 2008, 11:35pm UTC
well done!
Haim Kadman Aug 13, 2008, 1:53pm UTC
Thanks very much Shelbia.

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