by Bill's Spirit

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March 3, 2006

"Thirty Slivers of Moons" -- Two Word Challenge -- (free verse poetry)

May 18, 2008 04:06 PM EDT

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Time warp memories recall

false tears received for appearance sake

from being honor bound to sensitivity

and tongue tied with your cowboy moon

which waned from my life anyway

after achieving its own sense of full.

- "Thirty Slivers of Moons"

by Bill's Spirit

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19 May 2008

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Bill's Spirit is an Artist, Writer, Poet, Philosopher currently wordsmithing from a humble digital forge in small town Ohio.

The works of the man behind Bill's Spirit have been published in small alternative and amateur presses since 1986. Before that, they just filled notebooks, decorated walls and gathered dust in piles and boxes.

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Comments: 10

Granny Janny H. May 18, 2008, 4:17pm EDT

Shine on harvest moon
Reap your rewards!
Featured in Poet's Weekly Muse!

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Doc, in the middle, holding on... Curmudgeon esq. May 18, 2008, 4:35pm EDT

yep...

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Karen F. May 18, 2008, 4:54pm EDT

Thanks...very nice

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Carol Lloyd May 19, 2008, 4:30am EDT

Thanks...

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Bill's Spirit May 21, 2008, 6:04pm EDT

Janet -- I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for featuring it in your Poet's Weekly Muse group.

Doc. -- Thanks; you famous esquire of Curmudgeon. :-)

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Bill's Spirit May 21, 2008, 6:06pm EDT

Karen F. -- Thank you for the compliment.

Carol Lloyd -- My thanks to you for reading this.

Peace -

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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. May 26, 2008, 8:44am EDT

Wow, this one's better than the last one I just read by you.
Featured in the group, Poets, New and Old
with thanks,
Marilyn

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Jule's dreamin of a wonderfilled life for all research mode again Dec 4, 2008, 5:28pm EST

this was Great I enjoyed finding it thanks to rating resurrection

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Angela C. Dec 12, 2008, 8:59pm EST

Your poem puts me in a dreamy state of mind much like that place between sleep and waking. Very nice.

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Jeana Hamilton Dec 17, 2008, 12:34pm EST

very nice

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