Many Nights

That is interesting thanks for sharing.

quite breathtaking.i really think you are writing with quality

RONY! ~ This poetic masterpiece is D E E P! ...

Loved these lines . . .

"Consumed by my own desires

A perpendicular aspiration"

What a phrase ~ A perpendicular aspiration

Good title for a SERIES of poetics . . . Perpendicular Aspirations by Rony

You're really making us sit up and take POETIC NOTICE!

Blessings my friend ~
Rene

Lovely I visualized a few different things with this poem some of which scared me and others that delighted. I'm not sure if that is what you intended but that is what happened. Very nice Rony.

Rony ... congratulations. You survived your test this time. But after reading that I would be afraid to face another :( This brings to mind one of my favorite poems ... filled with truth and fits in with yours. I hope you don't mind my printing it. It spotlights the choice made in your poem & shows how touchy things are in that moment.
(Hope I'm interpreting your poem right. How embarrassing if I'm not :)
Anyway, I'll take the chance.
NEARLY THEY STOOD

Nearly they stood who fall.
Themselves, as they look back,
See always in the track
The one false step, where all
Even yet, by lightest swerve
Of will yet enslaved --
By smallest tremor of the smallest nerve,
Might have been saved.

Nearly they fell who stand.
And with cold after-fear
Look back to mark how near
They grazed the Siren's land,
Wondering that subtle fate,
By threads so spidery-fine,
The choice of ways so small, the event so great,
Should thus entwine.

Therefore oh, man, have fear
Lest oldest fears be true,
Lest thou too far pursue
The road that seems so clear,
And step, secure, a hair's
Breadth past the hair-breadth bourne,
Which, being once crossed forever unawares,
Denies return.

CS Lewis

Quite well written, Rony.

Thanks.

((( This can wake up your senses...wow )))