Goldilocks and the Three Bears of the Apocalypse
Look at her. Sleeping. The picture of peace.
No shadows cross over her complacent face.
No frown on her forehead. Unworried. Replete.
She dreams of a planet, and it is just right.
Her galaxy spirals. Its life-span's immense.
It's one in ten billion. By some lucky chance
Her planet has water and in liquid state
As it orbits its sun in conditions just right.
Her Earth has a moon whose rotation is such
That neither one wanders or wobbles too much
And all through the night it reflects the sun's light
And Goldilocks dreams that this is just right.
The physical constants in her universe
Bind atoms together with the precise force
That enables their fusion in the star's heat
So conditions for porridge have turned out just right.
Jupiter's presence attracts asteroids
Cataclysmic impacts that her world thus avoids
Meanwhile the porridge she left on the plate
Is crawling with microbes that find it just right.
Somehow the microbes produce RNA
Repeat and adapt and grow smarter each day
They swim and they crawl and they even take flight
As they breathe in a mixture of gas that's just right.
Look at her. Sleeping. The girl's had such fun.
She sat on three chairs but she only broke one.
She ate a child's porridge, which was hardly polite
But she couldn't resist it for it was just right.
What was that noise? There's someone downstairs!
If I'm not mistaken it's three angry bears.
When Goldilocks wakes she'll get such a fright.
Oh dear! Look away children. Something's not right.
She's nowhere to run. She's already at home.
The house that she ransacked in fact was her own.
Here come Fury and Terror and Black Endless Night.
She'll be sorry she spoiled it when it was just right.


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Kristina
"Meanwhile the porridge she left on the plate
Is crawling with microbes that find it just right."
Thought maybe in your version, the bears would find poor Goldilocks in the bathroom, leaning over the toilet, puking her guts out!
Perfect to be featured in
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Thank you for the submission, Sir.
I'm seeing it as the world, not the cottage.
Goldilocks, carefree, unknowing, unfettered by responsibility.
The Three Bears...
"Here come Fury and Terror and Black Endless Night."
End Game. Wow...
Wilka
Congrats
Interesting penning, in fairy tale form, of how repletion causes one to be unreflective and unaware of consequential dangers. Very well written; great cadence, especially when read aloud.
Congratulations on your win! A first place write indeed!
'Here come Fury and Terror and Black Endless Night.
She'll be sorry she spoiled it when it was just right.'...
Love that, Mike.
Your imagination and creativity are always a delight.