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Approaching Storm (cinquain)

May 06, 2008 07:25 PM EDT

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Approaching Storm

Lightning
Without warning
Jagged bolt splits the sky
Anticipate the forthcoming
Thunder

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Comments: 15

Elaine B. May 6, 2008, 7:59pm EDT

Nice poem!

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Cheryl W. May 6, 2008, 9:46pm EDT

Wonderfully descriptive cinquain, DragonSoul...:)

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Wade A. May 6, 2008, 10:45pm EDT

"Excuse me while I kiss the sky"

As usual, I love it. Woven to the finale. Cheers!

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pamela r. May 6, 2008, 10:54pm EDT

one of the better cinquains i've read in a while, very nice indeed.

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Elsie Duggan May 7, 2008, 2:42am EDT

Thanks for commenting on my poem today, I used to write all these different styles with you, but somehow got off on a writing spree of my own, this is a wonderful cinquain , I see by the dates you have posted you are not around all that much, still
busy with the jobs I guess, my best to you DragonSoul. Elsie

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Krissy spreading my wings hoping to soar W. May 7, 2008, 4:25am EDT

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Virginia M. May 7, 2008, 10:22am EDT

I can feel the Approaching Storm. Excellent!

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Jim Ross May 7, 2008, 12:04pm EDT

Great, DragonSoul. I feel the reverberations from the storm. A wonderfully visceral cinquain.

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Glenn T. May 8, 2008, 2:13am EDT

Edges of raw elements in lines of illustrative power.

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Jennifer J. May 19, 2008, 2:35pm EDT

Lovely.

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Austin Cushing May 19, 2008, 7:50pm EDT

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Pepsie J. May 22, 2008, 6:09am EDT

Beautifully done.

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Jade Autume Jul 1, 2008, 4:32pm EDT

I'm a real storm lover, Its nice that someone appreciates the weather from time to time, and does it well.

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