Everyone admired when you entered into the hall
Whispered, stared, wondered about your glance
As you appeared in an incredible, zippered, sacred, red Dress
Hearts were scared, wildered, stirred, and shivered as you injured them all
Your flowered hair lured and tortured many
As embroidered, textured gown flattered
When your flared lips stammered and delivered 'Hi'
You daggered, butchered and murdered so many
That colored, leathered purse and your word 'Yes'
To dance with me, with a checkered, flavored hanky
The feathered oystered stole smeared the bored evening
When you postured, cheered and captured my mess
My desired soul pondered , pampered ,conquered my slavered heart
Soared high to see you snickered and flustered too
I was slaughtered when saw that you fingered the silvered ring
Deterred, Devoured, Despaired, Ignored, I abjured to apart





Comments: 11
You packed so many reds in this short poem....but you managed to tell a powerful story.
That really took some good writing talent. Well done. I loved the final twist.
Blessings always...